How bad, though, is the article itself?

"She looked up to see him turning blue".

Why? No where does it mention why! Why? Why? Why?

(This in no way questions his heroism. He did good things. But the
writing could be improved dramatically).



On Fri, May 27, 2011 at 1:39 PM, G Money <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> *ahem*
>
> yeah......um...........
>
> Husband saves wife's life during Joplin tornado...she tells Brian Williams
> about it in the video at the bottom:
>
> http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-1391145/Joplin-MO-tornado-Wife-talks-moment-husband-gave-life-save-her.html
>
> I um......yeah....need a minute.
>
>
> 

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