First blush it looks very nice. I looked at it on an iPhone. Once I get power back I will do a more thorough review.
Loads really fast Good URL page naming Small footprint Design matches subject matter and informs the content Some nits: Image size at top of contact us is huge. Can you compress it a little and keep the look. The oval buttons. The text bleeds down below the chrome near the bottom of the letters and looks jagged Damn! Thunder and lightening and blizzard. Scary! Sorry, back to you. On about us. Love to meet the second from the right, assuming she is single. Or her sister if not. The image on the left should be floated left so that the paragraph wraps around it, not staying in that long long column. The diamond plate background on the text box has 3 stripes due to a tiled gradient. I don't care for that. The masthead image seems squished top to bottom. The top curved letters feel wrong. Overall a great design and good simple implementation I'll check other screen sizes. And look at the code and CSS tommorow for validity and good seo practices. On Friday, February 8, 2013, Bruce Sorge wrote: > > Hello everyone, > I was wondering if any of you would be willing to go to > http://www.americanironmc.net and offer some constructive criticism. It's > my first website in years and my first PHP site. I know that the graphic on > the home page is a little crooked and I'll get around to straightening it > out. Also, the photo gallery is not mine, its one I found. No use in > re-inventing the wheel. > > Thanks, > > Bruce > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Order the Adobe Coldfusion Anthology now! http://www.amazon.com/Adobe-Coldfusion-Anthology/dp/1430272155/?tag=houseoffusion Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/message.cfm/messageid:360685 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/unsubscribe.cfm
