I did look at it earlier before I left for the day. Did you actually want a critique? If so all I have to say at the moment, without looking at it again, is that the level of sarcasm impeded my ability to finish it. But on the whole, well written, well done. Maybe you want it to be a bit more eye-catching. Right now it says serious, possibly corporate site. Also, the nine dwarves thing is funnier if you do not explain that you are very tall. Then it would seem like you are saying they are all very small men trying to fill big shoes.
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