davidhassell commented on this pull request.
> @@ -79,17 +79,30 @@ __Map parameters:__:: * **`sweep_angle_axis`** * **`fixed_angle_axis`** -__Map coordinates:__:: The x (abscissa) and y (ordinate) rectangular coordinates are identified by the **`standard_name`** attribute values **`projection_x_coordinate`** and **`projection_y_coordinate`** respectively. In the case of this projection, the projection coordinates in this projection are directly related to the scanning angle of the satellite instrument, and their units are radians. +__Map coordinates:__:: The x (abscissa) and y (ordinate) rectangular coordinates are identified by the **`standard_name`** attribute values **`projection_x_angular_coordinate`** or **`projection_x_coordinate`** (deprecated) and **`projection_y_angular_coordinate`** or **`projection_x_coordinate`** (deprecated), respectively. This sentence has a lot of "or"s and "and"s. Perhaps an extra comma after the first "(deprecated)" might help parsing? __Map coordinates:__:: The x (abscissa) and y (ordinate) rectangular coordinates are identified by the **`standard_name`** attribute values **`projection_x_angular_coordinate`** or **`projection_x_coordinate`** (deprecated), **[[new comma here]]** and **`projection_y_angular_coordinate`** or **`projection_x_coordinate`** (deprecated), respectively. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/cf-convention/cf-conventions/pull/232#pullrequestreview-345717612 This list forwards relevant notifications from Github. It is distinct from [email protected], although if you do nothing, a subscription to the UCAR list will result in a subscription to this list. To unsubscribe from this list only, send a message to [email protected].
