The text scans well. I would have benefited from a stand-alone set of definitions for these and subsequent highlighting of the normative terms or maybe just highlighting of the normative terms in the text. Terms I'm thinking about are: - Auxiliary coordinate constructs - Dimension coordinate construct - Cell method constructs
--- I notice a standalone "coordinate construct" used as in "For a given coordinate construct ..." which has me a little confused. Can you review what you really mean by construct here? I think there might be some inconsistency in use as an instance of a coordinate construct, where "coordinate construct" is a data model -- not an instance? Another example of this confusion is in: > The interior ring array spans the domain axis constructs of the coordinate > construct --- I'm struggling a little bit with the casual reference to polygons as cells -- I get it and don't disagree but think the language could treat it a little more carefully. e.g. (note there may be other instances of this) > If a cell is composed of multiple polygon parts, an individual polygon may > define an "interior ring" ... *If a polygonal cell is composed of multiple parts, it may have holes defined by "interior ring(s) ...* --- I think there are probably a number of opportunities to break lists that are consecutive sentences into bulleted lists for easy of reading -- but I leave that to you as the author. --- Once these comments have been address (saying no is a fine response), I am happy with the changes and don't want to stand in the way of them getting incorporated. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/cf-convention/cf-conventions/issues/271#issuecomment-634647787 This list forwards relevant notifications from Github. It is distinct from [email protected], although if you do nothing, a subscription to the UCAR list will result in a subscription to this list. To unsubscribe from this list only, send a message to [email protected].
