Not that it's got anything to do with cf, but you might want to correct the
application description.

"Fire Up The Barbie is an all Aussie app that let’s us Aussie’s do what we
do best – organize and cook up a barbie!
The application let’s you search for a bbq in ACT (more data to come, as we
have mined data for all states) and organize an event for it on facebook,
all details are passed to facebook where you can create the event and invite
your friends."


   - it's not "let's", it's "lets".
   - it's not "Aussie's" it's "Aussies"
   - "organise" not "organized". the latter is a valid american English
   alternative, but hey, you are, after all, selling a true blue, fair dinkum
   Aussie app.

 Not trying to be a prick or a smartass (although I very much am both of
them), but bad grammar or spelling always reflect badly on the app and the
developer.

Cheers,

Tof


On Thu, Nov 12, 2009 at 4:20 PM, Taco Fleur <[email protected]>wrote:

> Hey guys,
>
> I just submitted an app written in CF and JS, just wondering if you could
> spare a moment and cast your vote (5 stars of course ;-) here
> http://mashupaustralia.org/mashups/fire-up-the-barbie/
>
> Ooh, and its a facebook app as well so you can add it to your profile and
> whenever you feel like a barbie with your mates, just Fire Up The Barbie,
> crack open a tinnie and cook some snags!
>
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> Taco Fleur
> clickfind™ - The new Australian Online Marketing Platform (OMP)
> http://www.onlinemarketingplatform.com.au
> http://www.clickfind.com.au
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