On Sun, Aug 21, 2011 at 6:25 AM, Christian Kellermann <ck...@pestilenz.org> wrote: > > Newcomers, please have a look and if you happen to have some spare > time, get me some feedback on what can be improved.
Wow. These are great resources. Thank you! :) For now, a few comments about the chickenista guide (html slides): * slide 3, (elevator pitch), I would add a bullet point containing, "Friendly and involved community." Also, maybe put the "Hello, World" example on its own page, and use (print) instead of (display) (newline)? * slide 5: s/packages/Chicken distributions/ (otherwise people might think you're talking about eggs) * slide 12: put ":P" after "rotten eggs" * slide 17: s/benefits by/benefits of/ and s/A magnitude/An order of magnitude/ * slide 18: Did you mean to add more to the 2nd bullet point? Or maybe "utils"? * slide 22: I don't understand the first bullet point (about "units"). * slide 23: maybe put the name "Chickadee" at the top? * slide 35: 3rd bullet may not be displaying correctly. I get "chicken-install -deploy will copy all dependencies into th at" ---John _______________________________________________ Chicken-users mailing list Chicken-users@nongnu.org https://lists.nongnu.org/mailman/listinfo/chicken-users