I saw this in a couple of discussions around the web (not OUR
forums)--they had looked at the very first sentence of the daily
featured article, then saw that that first sentence was identical to
the Wikipedia article, and then assumed that we had not changed the
rest of the article.

Suggestion: Could the person(s) choosing the featured article make an
effort to revise the first sentence, even if trivially?  (Though it
often could be improved over the Wikipedia one)  This might help
differentiate CZ.

I've been watching intermittently for a couple of weeks, and the
majority of the features did seem to start with an identical first
sentence.  In today's Prime Number, for example, we could just remove
the work namely, but I also think the definition in that first
sentence, as it stands, could be stated more simply.  I didn't just go
edit it because I'm trying to make a point here.  :-)

-- 
Pat G. Palmer
http://www.harbormist.com/pat/
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