Raoul Carag wrote:
> A revised version of Network Link Names has been posted for review and 
> feedback. It incorporates corrections and feedback received since its 
> first posting.
> 
> Check out:
> 
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/clearview/docs
> 
My comments follow:

1. Page 1, section 1:

I think you should leave out the IPMP vanity name completely in this 
document, as IPMP interfaces names are not link names at all, and mentioning 
it here only causes confusion.

2. Page 1, section 2, "upgrades"

You should mention the reason why we keep the prior-upgration link names: it 
is because there might be other configurations already associated to the old 
link names. Also, although you discussed later in this document, it is still 
good to remind that administrators must careful check no configuration 
associated with the old name before they rename those links.

3. Page 2, section 4

I think you should mention show-link in the list, even it is a existing 
subcommand.

4. Page 8, section 5.3

I've made autopush as a linkprop, so that one should configure autopush 
using the dladm set-linkprop subcommand.

5. Most of the show-xxx subcommand output are changed during my development 
work. I will soon update my document, or I can lent one test machine to you 
so that you can test it on and update the document.

Thanks
- Cathy

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