Hi thanks for the feedback. I will update the page according to your inputs.
I suggest to restructure the getting-stared section as follows: getting-stared is an overview. first-time user can find inks that might help to start more quicky: - Downloads (I suggest to link to the repo until a release is done) - Build Clerezza by yourself - Launching Clerezza - Clerezza Console - Clerezza Documentation => link to http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/documentation/ - Clerezza Tutorials (How to create a bundle in java using apache clerezza archetype, create bundle using clerezza console and bundledevtools etc...) - Link to Feliix => OSGi tutorial - Go to the tutorial page to learn some OSGi basics. - Link to Felix => OSGi FAQ - Check out the OSGi FAQ for answers to common questions. Is there something else? CHeers tsuy On Tue, Mar 22, 2011 at 6:38 PM, Reto Bachmann-Gmuer <[email protected]> wrote: > It does look nice! > > Just a few remarks: > > - The documentation on the instances which is also available on > http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/documentation/ shold be linked and > styled, even if we keep most pages static this one shouldn't be as we > otherwise duplicate work > - keep the uris cool by not having .html in them, i.e. for static files > create an index file i the respective folder > - we should write an easier getting started (using downloaded version and > bundledevtools) and have a seprate page on how to compile, the instruction > on installing bundles are outdated > - where to things like the howto on using the shell go to? > > Cheers, > reto > > > On Tue, Mar 22, 2011 at 5:52 PM, Henry Story <[email protected]> > wrote: >> Looks very very nice! >> >> I have not checked the detailed content yet, but it feels like a serious > project. :-) >> >> I think it is worth having a link from the default http://clerezza.org/page >> to it, >> at the very least. >> >> Henry >> >> >> On 22 Mar 2011, at 17:31, Tsuyoshi Ito wrote: >> >>> Hi >>> >>> I have added/updated the text of the following pages: >>> >>> http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/index.html >>> http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/getting-started.html >>> http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/architecture.html >>> http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/downloads.html >>> http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/mailinglists.html >>> >>> Notice: >>> - Content from architecture.html is taken from a scientific report >>> written by hasan. Some sections may be obsolete or have to be updated. >>> - There is also an draft FAQ template >>> (http://incubator.apache.org/clerezza/spike/faq.html). >>> >>> The content is available in issue CLEREZZA-448. >>> >>> Cheers >>> Tsuy >> >> Social Web Architect >> http://bblfish.net/ >> >> >
