On Tue, 4 Oct 2022 20:23:28 GMT, Alexey Ivanov <[email protected]> wrote:
>> I fixed the typo “serie” → "series" which was highlighted by a spellchecker.
>>
>> I also simplified the description, fixed the grammar, added `{@code}` around
>> types, added link to `requestFocus` in the example.
>
> src/java.desktop/share/classes/sun/awt/SunToolkit.java line 1451:
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>> 1449: *
>> 1450: * <p> This method allows writing tests without explicit timeouts
>> 1451: * or waiting for some event. Example:
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> Should it be “without _using_ … or waiting …”?
> Does “for an event” sound better?
In my opinion, "without using ... or waiting ..." seems better to match the
tense of "waiting" to show more clearly what the "or" is intended for (assuming
the OR is meant for the explicit timeouts and the waiting for an event).
Otherwise, the "or" may be confused to be between "writing ... or waiting ...".
For the "event" portion, I think either here is OK. I don't think either would
cause confusion and both sound reasonable.
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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/10563
