Minor cleanup on VMware docs, remove v1000

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Branch: refs/heads/4.0
Commit: 45b6c09053b968eb62c07627dd283c008a0cc52f
Parents: 5d18785
Author: Joe Brockmeier <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Oct 22 09:22:15 2012 -0500
Committer: Chip Childers <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Oct 22 11:00:18 2012 -0400

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 docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml      |   17 ++++++++---------
 docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/blob/45b6c090/docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml b/docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml
index b8bfa85..736b122 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml
@@ -30,9 +30,8 @@
     <title>Preparation Checklist for VMware</title>
     <para>For a smoother installation, gather the following information before 
you start:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem><para><xref linkend="vmware-vcenter-checklist" 
/></para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para><xref linkend="vmware-network-checklist" 
/></para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>In addition to the VMware-specific checklists, you 
should also see Preparation Checklists</para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>Information listed in <xref 
linkend="vmware-vcenter-checklist" /></para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>Information listed in <xref 
linkend="vmware-network-checklist" /></para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <section id="vmware-vcenter-checklist">
         <title>vCenter Checklist</title>
@@ -148,7 +147,7 @@
     <section id="vmware-vsphere-installation-steps">
     <title>vSphere Installation Steps</title>
     <orderedlist>
-    <listitem><para>Download and purchase vSphere from the VMware Website 
(<ulink 
url="https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&amp;lp=1";>https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&amp;lp=1</ulink>)
 and install it by following the VMware vSphere Installation 
Guide.</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>If you haven't already, you'll need to download and 
purchase vSphere from the VMware Website (<ulink 
url="https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&amp;lp=1";>https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&amp;lp=1</ulink>)
 and install it by following the VMware vSphere Installation 
Guide.</para></listitem>
         <listitem>
         <para>Following installation, perform the following configuration, 
which are described in the next few sections:</para>
         <informaltable frame="all">
@@ -200,7 +199,7 @@
         </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
     <para>In the host configuration tab, click the 
&quot;Hardware/Networking&quot; link to bring up the networking configuration 
page as above.</para>
-    <section id="vmware-physical-host-networking-config-vswitch">
+ <section id="vmware-physical-host-networking-config-vswitch">
         <title>Configure Virtual Switch</title>
         <para>A default virtual switch vSwitch0 is created. &PRODUCT; requires 
all ESXi hosts in the cloud to use the same set of virtual switch names. If you 
change the default virtual switch name, you will need to configure one or more 
&PRODUCT; configuration variables as well.</para>
         <section 
id="vmware-physical-host-networking-config-vswitch-separate-traffic">
@@ -268,7 +267,7 @@ esxcfg-firewall -o 59000-60000,tcp,out,vncextras
         <para>NIC bonding on vSphere hosts may be done according to the 
vSphere installation guide.</para>
     </section>
     </section>
-    <section id="vmware-vsphere-cluster-config-nexus-vswitch">
+    <!--    <section id="vmware-vsphere-cluster-config-nexus-vswitch">
     <title>Configuring a vSphere Cluster with Nexus 1000v Virtual 
Switch</title>
     <para>&PRODUCT; supports Cisco Nexus 1000v dvSwitch (Distributed Virtual 
Switch) for virtual network configuration in a VMware vSphere environment. This 
section helps you configure a vSphere cluster with Nexus 1000v virtual switch 
in a VMware vCenter environment. For information on creating a vSphere cluster, 
see <xref linkend="vmware-install" /></para>
     <section id="vmware-vsphere-cluster-config-nexus-vswitch-about">
@@ -542,8 +541,8 @@ esxcfg-firewall -o 59000-60000,tcp,out,vncextras
             <para>Click Yes in the confirmation dialog box.</para>
         </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
-    </section>
-    </section>
+    </section> 
+</section> -->
     <section id="vmware-vsphere-iscsi-storage-preparation">
     <title>Storage Preparation for vSphere (iSCSI only)</title>
     <para>Use of iSCSI requires preparatory work in vCenter.  You must add an 
iSCSI target and create an iSCSI datastore.</para>
@@ -628,5 +627,5 @@ esxcfg-firewall -o 59000-60000,tcp,out,vncextras
     <section id="vmware-add-hosts-config-vsphere-cluster">
     <title>Add Hosts or Configure Clusters (vSphere)</title>
     <para>Use vCenter to create a vCenter cluster and add your desired hosts 
to the cluster.  You will later add the entire cluster to &PRODUCT;. (see <xref 
linkend="add-clusters-vsphere" />).</para>
-    </section>
+</section> 
 </section>

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/blob/45b6c090/docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml 
b/docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml
index 5fac4fe..207a456 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/vmware-requirements.xml
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem><para>Be sure all the hotfixes provided by the hypervisor 
vendor are applied. Track the release of hypervisor patches through your 
hypervisor vendor's support channel, and apply patches as soon as possible 
after they are released. &PRODUCT; will not track or notify you of required 
hypervisor patches. It is essential that your hosts are completely up to date 
with the provided hypervisor patches. The hypervisor vendor is likely to refuse 
to support any system that is not up to date with patches.</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <warning><para>The lack of up-do-date hotfixes can lead to data corruption 
and lost VMs.</para></warning>
+    <warning><title>Apply All Necessary Hotfixes</title><para>The lack of 
up-do-date hotfixes can lead to data corruption and lost VMs.</para></warning>
     </section>
     <section id="vmware-requirements-hardware">
     <title>Hardware requirements:</title>
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
     <section id="vmware-requirements-vcenter">
     <title>vCenter Server requirements:</title>
     <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem><para>Processor - 2 CPUs 2.0GHz or higher Intel or AMD x86 
processors. Processor may be higher if the database runs on the same 
machine.</para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>Processor - 2 CPUs 2.0GHz or higher Intel or AMD x86 
processors. Processor requirements may be higher if the database runs on the 
same machine.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Memory - 3GB RAM. RAM requirements may be higher if 
your database runs on the same machine.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Disk storage - 2GB. Disk requirements may be higher if 
your database runs on the same machine.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Microsoft SQL Server 2005 Express disk requirements. 
The bundled database requires up to 2GB free disk space to decompress the 
installation archive.</para></listitem>
@@ -71,10 +71,10 @@
         <listitem><para>All hosts must be 64-bit and must support HVM 
(Intel-VT or AMD-V enabled). All hosts within a cluster must be homogenous. 
That means the CPUs must be of the same type, count, and feature 
flags.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>The &PRODUCT; management network must not be 
configured as a separate virtual network. The &PRODUCT; management network is 
the same as the vCenter management network, and will inherit its configuration. 
See <xref linkend="vmware-physical-host-networking-config-vcenter-mgt" 
/>.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>&PRODUCT; requires ESXi.  ESX is not 
supported.</para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>All resources used for &PRODUCT; must be used for 
&PRODUCT; only.  &PRODUCT; cannot shares instance of ESXi or storage with other 
management consoles.  Do not share the same storage volumes that will be used 
by &PRODUCT; with a different set of ESXi servers that are not managed by 
&PRODUCT;.</para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>All resources used for &PRODUCT; must be used for 
&PRODUCT; only.  &PRODUCT; cannot share instance of ESXi or storage with other 
management consoles.  Do not share the same storage volumes that will be used 
by &PRODUCT; with a different set of ESXi servers that are not managed by 
&PRODUCT;.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Put all target ESXi hypervisors in a cluster in a 
separate Datacenter in vCenter.</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>The cluster that will be managed by &PRODUCT; should 
not contain any VMs.  Do not run the management server, vCenter or any other 
VMs on the cluster that is designated for &PRODUCT; use.  Create  a separate 
cluster for use of &PRODUCT; and make sure that they are no VMs in this 
cluster.</para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>All the required VLANS must be trunked into all 
network switches that are connected to the ESXi hypervisor hosts.  These would 
include the VLANS for Management, Storage, vMotion, and guest VLANs.  The guest 
VLAN (used in Advanced Networking; see Network Setup) is a contiguous range of 
VLANs that will be managed by &PRODUCT;. &PRODUCT; supports Nexus 1000v virtual 
switch. For more information, see <xref 
linkend="vmware-vsphere-cluster-config-nexus-vswitch" />.</para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>All the required VLANS must be trunked into all 
network switches that are connected to the ESXi hypervisor hosts.  These would 
include the VLANS for Management, Storage, vMotion, and guest VLANs.  The guest 
VLAN (used in Advanced Networking; see Network Setup) is a contiguous range of 
VLANs that will be managed by &PRODUCT;. <!-- &PRODUCT; supports Nexus 1000v 
virtual switch. For more information, see <xref 
linkend="vmware-vsphere-cluster-config-nexus-vswitch" />.--> </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     </section>
 </section>

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