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I looked at a few more that might need fixing. 1> All the .xml should have ASF license header. 2> DOCTYPE header references the DTD at file:///C:/Program%20Files%20(x86)/Publican/DocBook_DTD/docbookx.dtd instead of "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd"; 3> &PRODUCT; entity to be used where branding is done (Apache CloudStack). Should not have references to CloudPlatform. 4> The document still references CloudPlatform in most places. You should use the &entity there as well? 5> I see a reference to CloudStack 3.0.4. CloudStack has not had a 3.0.4 release. Should these be 4.0 perhaps? Let me know if you need any help fixing these. I can fix 1> and 2>. - Prasanna Santhanam On Aug. 3, 2012, 6:01 a.m., Radhika PC wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/6328/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Aug. 3, 2012, 6:01 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack. > > > Description > ------- > > This patch includes the preliminary documentation draft for the defect fixes > and new features: site-to-site vpn and inter-vlan routing. > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/Book_Info.xml 6ff42f2 > docs/en-US/acquire-new-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/add-tier.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/add-vm-to-tier.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/admin-guide.xml c10455d > docs/en-US/change-ssvm-service-offering.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/compatibility-matrix.xml ac8e838 > docs/en-US/configure-acl.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/configure-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/create-vpn-customer-gateway.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/create-vpn-gateway-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/create-vr-network-offering.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat.xml 0895b88 > docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/release-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/release-notes-3.0.4.xml 21f47c6 > docs/en-US/site-to-site-vpn.xml 2e29909 > docs/en-US/upgrade-management-server.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/using-sshkeys.xml a753b32 > docs/en-US/vpc.xml cd298a1 > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6328/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > > Thanks, > > Radhika PC > >
