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Looks very good, thanks. Suggest removing the paragraph "For more information about using VMs ... in the Administrator's Guide" since we can't guarantee this section will not appear in the same book with the "Working with VMs" section, nor that there will always be a separate book called "Administrator's Guide" that contains the "Working with VMs" section. - Jessica Tomechak On Aug. 31, 2012, 7:10 a.m., Gavin Lee wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/6868/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Aug. 31, 2012, 7:10 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack and Jessica Tomechak. > > > Description > ------- > > Add docbook xml for section Initializing and Testing > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/initialize-and-test.xml e5a57d8 > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6868/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > Passed publican build and verified output pdf > > > Thanks, > > Gavin Lee > >
