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Hi Gavin, Thanks for the work, that looks much better - I did find a couple more issues when reading over the text - one needs to be corrected I imagine, the other is up to you. There are several occurrences of CloudStack that should be &PRODUCT; The optional issue is that there are a number of references to old versions of CloudStack (3.0.0, 3.0.2) that seem superfluous for a 4.0.0 install manual. --David - David Nalley On Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m., Gavin Lee wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley and Jessica Tomechak. > > > Description > ------- > > Add docbook xml for Citrix Xenserver Installation. > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/citrix-xenserver-installation.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/provisioning-steps.xml fda3e17 > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > Passed publican build and verified html/pdf outputs. > > > Thanks, > > Gavin Lee > >
