My apologies for applying to this branch - I'll revert shortly.

--David

On Wed, Oct 17, 2012 at 6:32 PM,  <ke4...@apache.org> wrote:
> http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/blob/c24bc002/docs/en-US/management-server-install-systemvm.xml
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> diff --git a/docs/en-US/management-server-install-systemvm.xml 
> b/docs/en-US/management-server-install-systemvm.xml
> index c2c1212..711bcba 100644
> --- a/docs/en-US/management-server-install-systemvm.xml
> +++ b/docs/en-US/management-server-install-systemvm.xml
> @@ -21,36 +21,53 @@
>   specific language governing permissions and limitations
>   under the License.
>  -->
> -
>  <section id="prepare-system-vm-template">
> -    <title>Prepare the System VM Template</title>
> -    <para>Secondary storage must be seeded with a template that is used for 
> &PRODUCT; system VMs.</para>
> -    <note><para>When copying and pasting a command, be sure the command has 
> pasted as a single line before executing. Some document viewers may introduce 
> unwanted line breaks in copied text.</para></note>
> -    <orderedlist>
> -        <listitem><para>On the Management Server, run one or more of the 
> following cloud-install-sys-tmplt commands to retrieve and decompress the 
> system VM template. Run the command for each hypervisor type that you expect 
> end users to run in this Zone.</para>
> -            <para>If your secondary storage mount point is not named 
> /mnt/secondary, substitute your own mount point name.</para>
> -            <para>If you set the &PRODUCT; database encryption type to "web" 
> when you set up the database, you must now add the parameter -s 
> &lt;management-server-secret-key&gt;. See About Password and Key 
> Encryption.</para>
> -            <para>This process will require approximately 5 GB of free space 
> on the local file system and up to 30 minutes each time it runs.</para>
> -            <itemizedlist>
> -                <listitem><para>For XenServer:</para>
> -                    <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.vhd.bz2 -h 
> xenserver -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> -                </listitem>
> -                <listitem><para>For vSphere:</para>
> -                    <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/burbank/burbank-systemvm-08012012.ova -h 
> vmware -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt;  -F</programlisting>
> -                </listitem>
> -                <listitem><para>For KVM:</para>
> -                    <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.qcow2.bz2 
> -h kvm -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> -                </listitem>
> -            </itemizedlist>
> +  <title>Prepare the System VM Template</title>
> +  <para>Secondary storage must be seeded with a template that is used for 
> &PRODUCT; system
> +    VMs.</para>
> +  <note>
> +    <para>When copying and pasting a command, be sure the command has pasted 
> as a single line before
> +      executing. Some document viewers may introduce unwanted line breaks in 
> copied text.</para>
> +  </note>
> +  <orderedlist>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>On the Management Server, run one or more of the following 
> cloud-install-sys-tmplt
> +        commands to retrieve and decompress the system VM template. Run the 
> command for each
> +        hypervisor type that you expect end users to run in this Zone.</para>
> +      <para>If your secondary storage mount point is not named 
> /mnt/secondary, substitute your own
> +        mount point name.</para>
> +      <para>If you set the &PRODUCT; database encryption type to "web" when 
> you set up the database,
> +        you must now add the parameter -s 
> &lt;management-server-secret-key&gt;. See About Password
> +        and Key Encryption.</para>
> +      <para>This process will require approximately 5 GB of free space on 
> the local file system and
> +        up to 30 minutes each time it runs.</para>
> +      <itemizedlist>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For XenServer:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.vhd.bz2 -h 
> xenserver -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> +        </listitem>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For vSphere:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/burbank/burbank-systemvm-08012012.ova -h 
> vmware -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt;  -F</programlisting>
> +        </listitem>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For KVM:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.qcow2.bz2 
> -h kvm -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
>          </listitem>
> -        <listitem><para>If you are using a separate NFS server, perform this 
> step. If you are using the Management Server as the NFS server, you MUST NOT 
> perform this step.</para>
> -            <para>When the script has finished, unmount secondary storage 
> and remove the created directory.</para>
> -            <programlisting>
> +      </itemizedlist>
> +    </listitem>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>If you are using a separate NFS server, perform this step. If 
> you are using the
> +        Management Server as the NFS server, you MUST NOT perform this 
> step.</para>
> +      <para>When the script has finished, unmount secondary storage and 
> remove the created
> +        directory.</para>
> +      <programlisting>
>  # umount /mnt/secondary
>  # rmdir /mnt/secondary
>              </programlisting>
> -        </listitem>
> -        <listitem><para>Repeat these steps for each secondary storage 
> server.</para>
> -        </listitem>
> -    </orderedlist>
> +    </listitem>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>Repeat these steps for each secondary storage server.</para>
> +    </listitem>
> +  </orderedlist>
>  </section>
>
> http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/blob/c24bc002/docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> diff --git a/docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml 
> b/docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml
> index 160cea4..a9872cd 100644
> --- a/docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml
> +++ b/docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml
> @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
>  <?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
> -<!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" 
> "file:///C:/Program%20Files%20(x86)/Publican/DocBook_DTD/docbookx.dtd" [
> +<!DOCTYPE bookinfo PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" 
> "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd"; [
>  <!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "cloudstack.ent">
>  %BOOK_ENTITIES;
>  ]>
> @@ -21,37 +21,53 @@
>      specific language governing permissions and limitations
>      under the License.
>  -->
> -
>  <section id="prepare-system-vm-template">
> -       <title>Prepare the System VM Template</title>
> -       <para>Secondary storage must be seeded with a template that is used 
> for &PRODUCT; system VMs.</para>
> -       <note><para>When copying and pasting a command, be sure the command 
> has pasted as a single line before executing. Some document viewers may 
> introduce unwanted line breaks in copied text.</para></note>
> -       <orderedlist>
> -               <listitem><para>On the Management Server, run one or more of 
> the following cloud-install-sys-tmplt commands to retrieve and decompress the 
> system VM template. Run the command for each hypervisor type that you expect 
> end users to run in this Zone.</para>
> -                       <para>If your secondary storage mount point is not 
> named /mnt/secondary, substitute your own mount point name.</para>
> -                       <para>If you set the &PRODUCT; database encryption 
> type to "web" when you set up the database, you must now add the parameter -s 
> &lt;management-server-secret-key&gt;. See About Password and Key 
> Encryption.</para>
> -                       <para>This process will require approximately 5 GB of 
> free space on the local file system and up to 30 minutes each time it 
> runs.</para>
> -                       <itemizedlist>
> -                               <listitem><para>For XenServer:</para>
> -                                       <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.vhd.bz2 -h 
> xenserver -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> -                               </listitem>
> -                               <listitem><para>For vSphere:</para>
> -                                       <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.ova -h 
> vmware -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt;  -F</programlisting>
> -                               </listitem>
> -                               <listitem><para>For KVM:</para>
> -                                       <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/agent/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.qcow2.bz2 
> -h kvm -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> -                               </listitem>
> -                       </itemizedlist>
> -               </listitem>
> -               <listitem><para>If you are using a separate NFS server, 
> perform this step. If you are using the Management
> -                               Server as the NFS server, you MUST NOT 
> perform this step.</para>
> -                       <para>When the script has finished, unmount secondary 
> storage and remove the created directory.</para>
> -                       <programlisting>
> +  <title>Prepare the System VM Template</title>
> +  <para>Secondary storage must be seeded with a template that is used for 
> &PRODUCT; system
> +    VMs.</para>
> +  <note>
> +    <para>When copying and pasting a command, be sure the command has pasted 
> as a single line before
> +      executing. Some document viewers may introduce unwanted line breaks in 
> copied text.</para>
> +  </note>
> +  <orderedlist>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>On the Management Server, run one or more of the following 
> cloud-install-sys-tmplt
> +        commands to retrieve and decompress the system VM template. Run the 
> command for each
> +        hypervisor type that you expect end users to run in this Zone.</para>
> +      <para>If your secondary storage mount point is not named 
> /mnt/secondary, substitute your own
> +        mount point name.</para>
> +      <para>If you set the &PRODUCT; database encryption type to "web" when 
> you set up the database,
> +        you must now add the parameter -s 
> &lt;management-server-secret-key&gt;. See About Password
> +        and Key Encryption.</para>
> +      <para>This process will require approximately 5 GB of free space on 
> the local file system and
> +        up to 30 minutes each time it runs.</para>
> +      <itemizedlist>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For XenServer:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.vhd.bz2 -h 
> xenserver -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> +        </listitem>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For vSphere:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.ova -h 
> vmware -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt;  -F</programlisting>
> +        </listitem>
> +        <listitem>
> +          <para>For KVM:</para>
> +          <programlisting># 
> /usr/lib64/cloud/common/scripts/storage/secondary/cloud-install-sys-tmplt -m 
> /mnt/secondary -u 
> http://download.cloud.com/templates/acton/acton-systemvm-02062012.qcow2.bz2 
> -h kvm -s &lt;optional-management-server-secret-key&gt; -F</programlisting>
> +        </listitem>
> +      </itemizedlist>
> +    </listitem>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>If you are using a separate NFS server, perform this step. If 
> you are using the
> +        Management Server as the NFS server, you MUST NOT perform this 
> step.</para>
> +      <para>When the script has finished, unmount secondary storage and 
> remove the created
> +        directory.</para>
> +      <programlisting>
>  # umount /mnt/secondary
>  # rmdir /mnt/secondary
>                         </programlisting>
> -               </listitem>
> -               <listitem><para>Repeat these steps for each secondary storage 
> server.</para>
> -               </listitem>
> -       </orderedlist>
> +    </listitem>
> +    <listitem>
> +      <para>Repeat these steps for each secondary storage server.</para>
> +    </listitem>
> +  </orderedlist>
>  </section>
>

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