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Tian Siyuan commented on CLOUDSTACK-584:
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I created a patch as below to fix this bug. Please review.
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>From 0915affb6116cb550715a0c1fb7b7b19e987ead6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tian Siyuan <tiansiy...@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2012 10:23:19 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Correct some typo in the *.xml files included in
Apache_CloudStack-4.0.0-incubating-CloudStack_Nicira_NVP_Guide-en-US
---
docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-devicemanagement.xml | 4 ++--
docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-features.xml | 2 +-
docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml | 4 ++--
docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml | 4 ++--
4 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-devicemanagement.xml
b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-devicemanagement.xml
index 2423ce3..9ffaa09 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-devicemanagement.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-devicemanagement.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
-->
<section id="Device-management">
<title>Device-management</title>
- <para>In CloudStack 4.0.x each Nicira NVP setup is considered a "device"
that can be added and removed from a physical network. To complete the
configuration of the Nicira NVP plugin a device needs to be added to the
physical network using the "addNiciraNVPDevice" API call. The plugin is now
enabled on the physical network and any guest networks created on that network
will be provisioned using the Nicra NVP Controller.</para>
+ <para>In CloudStack 4.0.x each Nicira NVP setup is considered a "device"
that can be added and removed from a physical network. To complete the
configuration of the Nicira NVP plugin a device needs to be added to the
physical network using the "addNiciraNVPDevice" API call. The plugin is now
enabled on the physical network and any guest networks created on that network
will be provisioned using the Nicira NVP Controller.</para>
<para>The plugin introduces a set of new API calls to manage the devices,
see below or refer to the API reference.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>addNiciraNvpDevice</para></listitem>
@@ -44,4 +44,4 @@
<listitem><para>listNiciraNVPDevices</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section>
\ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-features.xml
b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-features.xml
index b67323d..80fb2be 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-features.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-features.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
-->
<section id="Features-of-the-Nicira-NVP-Plugin">
<title>Features of the Nicira NVP Plugin</title>
- <para>In CloudStack release 4.0.0-incubating this plugin supports the
Connectivity service. This service is responsible for creating Layer 2 networks
supporting the networks created by Guests. In other words when an tennant
creates a new network, instead of the traditional VLAN a logical network will
be created by sending the appropriate calls to the Nicira NVP Controller.</para>
+ <para>In CloudStack release 4.0.0-incubating this plugin supports the
Connectivity service. This service is responsible for creating Layer 2 networks
supporting the networks created by Guests. In other words when a tenant creates
a new network, instead of the traditional VLAN a logical network will be
created by sending the appropriate calls to the Nicira NVP Controller.</para>
<para>The plugin has been tested with Nicira NVP versions 2.1.0, 2.2.0 and
2.2.1</para>
<note><para>In CloudStack 4.0.0-incubating only the XenServer hypervisor
is supported for use in combination with Nicira NVP</para></note>
<note><para>In CloudStack 4.0.0-incubating the UI components for this
plugin are not complete, configuration is done by sending commands to the
API</para></note>
diff --git a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
index 95a25bd..dbf52c0 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
@@ -31,6 +31,6 @@
<listitem><para>The username to access the API</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>The password to access the API</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>The UUID of the Transport Zone that contains the
hypervisors in this Zone</para></listitem>
- <listitem><para>The UUID of the Physical Network that will used for
the Guest networks</para></listitem>
+ <listitem><para>The UUID of the Physical Network that will be used for
the Guest networks</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section>
\ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
index 95a25bd..dbf52c0 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-preparations.xml
@@ -31,6 +31,6 @@
<listitem><para>The username to access the API</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>The password to access the API</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>The UUID of the Transport Zone that contains the
hypervisors in this Zone</para></listitem>
- <listitem><para>The UUID of the Physical Network that will used for
the Guest networks</para></listitem>
+ <listitem><para>The UUID of the Physical Network that will be used for
the Guest networks</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section>
\ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
index c912971..6088fda 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/plugin-niciranvp-uuidreferences.xml
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
<section id="UUID-references">
<title>UUID References</title>
<para>The plugin maintains several references in the CloudStack database
to items created on the NVP Controller.</para>
- <para>Every guest network this is created will have its broadcast type set
to Lswitch and if the network is in state "Implemented", the broadcast URI will
have the UUID of the Logical Switch that was created for this network on the
NVP Controller.</para>
+ <para>Every guest network that is created will have its broadcast type set
to Lswitch and if the network is in state "Implemented", the broadcast URI will
have the UUID of the Logical Switch that was created for this network on the
NVP Controller.</para>
<para>The Nics that are connected to one of the Logical Switches will have
their Logical Switch Port UUID listed in the nicira_nvp_nic_map table</para>
<note><para>All devices created on the NVP Controller will have a tag set
to domain-account of the owner of the network, this string can be used to
search for items in the NVP Controller.</para></note>
-</section>
\ No newline at end of file
+</section>
--
1.7.10.4
> typos in
> "Apache_CloudStack-4.0.0-incubating-CloudStack_Nicira_NVP_Guide-en-US"
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Key: CLOUDSTACK-584
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-584
> Project: CloudStack
> Issue Type: Bug
> Security Level: Public(Anyone can view this level - this is the
> default.)
> Components: Doc
> Affects Versions: 4.0.0
> Environment: Ubuntu 1210, x86
> Reporter: Tian Siyuan
> Priority: Minor
> Labels: documentation
> Fix For: 4.1.0
>
> Attachments:
> 0001-Correct-some-typo-in-the-.xml-files-included-in.patch
>
> Original Estimate: 10m
> Remaining Estimate: 10m
>
> p.1, "an tennant" -> "a tenant;
> p.3, "The UUID of the Physical Network that will used for the Guest networks"
> -> "The UUID of the Physical Network that will be used for the Guest
> networks";
> p.3, "Nicra" -> "Nicira";
> p.5, "Every guest network this is created" -> "Every guest network that is
> created".
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