coliver 2003/07/27 08:59:55
Modified: src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/flow index.xml tutor.xml
Log:
minor corrections
Revision Changes Path
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cocoon-2.1/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/flow/index.xml
Index: index.xml
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--- index.xml 13 Jul 2003 19:53:14 -0000 1.9
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@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
</authors>
</header>
<body>
- <s1 title="Control flow">
+ <s1 title="Control Flow">
<p>Cocoon has advanced control flow, the ability to describe the
order of Web pages that have to be sent to the client, at any
given point in time in an application.</p>
1.2 +3 -3
cocoon-2.1/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/flow/tutor.xml
Index: tutor.xml
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--- tutor.xml 26 Jul 2003 19:29:08 -0000 1.1
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@@ -8,14 +8,14 @@
<person name="Ovidiu Predescu" email="[EMAIL PROTECTED]"/>
</authors>
</header>
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+n
<body>
<s1 title="Tutorial: A Gentle Introduction to Flowscript">
-<p>We will create a simple number guessing game using Cocoon's Flowscript
engine.</p>
+<p>In this tutorial, we will create a simple number guessing game using
Cocoon's Flowscript engine.</p>
<p>
-Now that you've got Cocoon 2.1 deployed and running, go to where you have
Cocoon deployed and create a new subdirectory named <code>game</code>. Cocoon's
default main sitemap will automatically mount the sitemap in the
subdirectory.</p>
+After you have Cocoon 2.1 deployed and running, go to where you have Cocoon
deployed and create a new subdirectory named <code>game</code>. Cocoon's
default main sitemap will automatically mount the sitemap in the
subdirectory.</p>
<p>Create the following <code>sitemap.xmap</code> in the new
subdirectory:</p>
