Can someone have a look at this announcement, please? I rewrote some parts of it and want to know if all are happy or if we should change it.
Thanks Carsten > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]] > Sent: Tuesday, February 05, 2002 12:44 PM > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: cvs commit: xml-cocoon2 announcement.xml > > > cziegeler 02/02/05 03:43:32 > > Modified: . announcement.xml > Log: > Rewrite of announcement > > Revision Changes Path > 1.10 +9 -7 xml-cocoon2/announcement.xml > > Index: announcement.xml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/cvs/xml-cocoon2/announcement.xml,v > retrieving revision 1.9 > retrieving revision 1.10 > diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10 > --- announcement.xml 31 Jan 2002 13:29:48 -0000 1.9 > +++ announcement.xml 5 Feb 2002 11:43:32 -0000 1.10 > @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ > <project>Apache Cocoon @version@</project> > <abstract> > The Apache Cocoon team is proud to announce the new release > - of Apache Cocoon. This release has been tested thoroughly. > + of Apache Cocoon. > </abstract> > <body> > <p> > @@ -19,12 +19,6 @@ > </p> > > <p> > - This release of Cocoon is a complete rewrite of the Cocoon XML > - publishing framework and removes all of those design constraints > - that emerged from the Cocoon 1 experience. > - </p> > - > - <p> > Today, most web engineers consider XML as the key for an improved > web model and web site managers see XML as a way to reduce costs > and ease production. In an era where services rather than software > @@ -32,6 +26,14 @@ > for web publishing will be a winner, especially one based on open > standards. > </p> > + > + <p> > + This release of Cocoon is a maintainance release focusing on > + improved performance and robustness. In addition some bugs were > + fixed and new features were added. See the following changes list > + for more information. > + </p> > + > </body> > <changes version="@version@" file="changes.xml"/> > </announcement> > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > In case of troubles, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
