shannon 2002/06/07 14:10:52
Modified: src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts databases.xml
Log:
Previous commit was premature.
This commit clarifies the language.
Some edits.
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xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts/databases.xml
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--- databases.xml 28 Apr 2002 18:11:12 -0000 1.1
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@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@
<p>
Publishing dynamic content or creating web-applications at
some point often involves database access. Apache Cocoon
- offers a number of different facilities to access databases,
- (object) relational and XML. This document aims to give an
- overview over the different choices to access (object)
+ offers a number of different facilities to access
+ (object) relational and XML databases. This document provides
+ an overview of the different ways to access (object)
relational databases.
</p>
<p>
- This document will not explain how to setup database
+ This document will not explain how to set up database
connectivity with Apache Cocoon. For this, see <link
href="../../developing/datasources.html">here.</link>
</p>
@@ -37,14 +37,14 @@
<s1 title="Actions">
<p>
- <link href="actions.html">Actions</link> are code that is executed
- during pipeline setup and its outcome can change how the pipeline is
- assembled. This way a pipeline can for example contain an alternative
+ <link href="actions.html">Actions</link> are code to be executed
+ during pipeline setup. The outcome of an action can change how the
pipeline is
+ assembled. For exampl, a pipeline may produce an alternative
page to display when a database operation failed.
</p>
<p>
- Actions are especially great to insert, change, or delete data. By
- using the pipeline switching feature of actions, pages can be simpler
+ Actions are especially great for inserting, changing, or deleting
data.
+ When pipeline switching features of actions are used, pages can be
simpler
as they are only concerned with one view - either successful operation
or failure.
</p>
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