I like the wording, providing it isn't too long for "artistic" purposes.
Edward Ben Ostrowsky said the following on 1/26/2007 10:45 AM:
Well, if it's open for a rewrite, perhaps something like: It was hopeless. Maude and Agnes had cracked top-secret messages during World War II, but even Bletchley Park's finest cryptographers were mystified by the enigmatic "008". At the risk of dissecting frogs, I think it telegraphs the context and puts the punchline where it belongs: at the end. It also breaks well into three lines. Ben
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