josh-fell commented on a change in pull request #20146:
URL: https://github.com/apache/airflow/pull/20146#discussion_r765027417



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File path: docs/apache-airflow/logging-monitoring/logging-tasks.rst
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@@ -113,14 +113,14 @@ See :doc:`../modules_management` for details on how 
Python and Airflow manage mo
 External Links
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-When using remote logging, users can configure Airflow to show a link to an 
external UI within the Airflow Web UI. Clicking the link redirects a user to 
the external UI.
+When using remote logging, you can configure Airflow to show a link to an 
external UI within the Airflow Web UI. Clicking the link redirects you to the 
external UI.

Review comment:
       There were 2 different voices in the document. Most of the document was 
using second-person and I thought it was better to have a consistent voice 
across the doc.




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