BasPH commented on code in PR #30018:
URL: https://github.com/apache/airflow/pull/30018#discussion_r1141913598


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docs/apache-airflow/core-concepts/dags.rst:
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@@ -842,39 +842,39 @@ the dependency graph.
 The dependency detector is configurable, so you can implement your own logic 
different than the defaults in
 :class:`~airflow.serialization.serialized_objects.DependencyDetector`
 
-DAG pausing, deactivation and deletion
---------------------------------------
+Pause, deactivate and delete DAGs
+---------------------------------
 
 The DAGs have several states when it comes to being "not running". DAGs can be 
paused, deactivated
-and finally all metadata for the DAG can be deleted.
+and finally all metadata of the DAGs can be deleted.
 
-Dag can be paused via UI when it is present in the ``DAGS_FOLDER``, and 
scheduler stored it in
-the database, but the user chose to disable it via the UI. The "pause" and 
"unpause" actions are available
-via UI and API. Paused DAG is not scheduled by the Scheduler, but you can 
trigger them via UI for
-manual runs. In the UI, you can see Paused DAGs (in ``Paused`` tab). The DAGs 
that are un-paused
+A DAG can be paused via the UI when it is present in the ``DAGS_FOLDER``, and 
when the scheduler is stored in
+the database. However, the user can choose to disable this functionality via 
the UI. The "pause" and "unpause" actions are available
+via the UI and the API. Paused DAGs will not be scheduled by the Scheduler, 
but you can trigger them via the UI for
+manual runs. In the UI, you can see the Paused DAGs in the ``Paused`` tab. The 
DAGs that are not in the "paused" state
 can be found in the ``Active`` tab.
 
-Dag can be deactivated (do not confuse it with ``Active`` tag in the UI) by 
removing them from the
-``DAGS_FOLDER``. When scheduler parses the ``DAGS_FOLDER`` and misses the DAG 
that it had seen
-before and stored in the database it will set is as deactivated. The metadata 
and history of the
-DAG` is kept for deactivated DAGs and when the DAG is re-added to the 
``DAGS_FOLDER`` it will be again
-activated and history will be visible. You cannot activate/deactivate DAG via 
UI or API, this
-can only be done by removing files from the ``DAGS_FOLDER``. Once again - no 
data for historical runs of the
-DAG are lost when it is deactivated by the scheduler. Note that the ``Active`` 
tab in Airflow UI
-refers to DAGs that are not both ``Activated`` and ``Not paused`` so this 
might initially be a
+DAGs can be deactivated (do not confuse it with the ``Active`` tag in the UI) 
by removing them from the
+``DAGS_FOLDER``. When the scheduler parses the ``DAGS_FOLDER`` and misses a 
DAG that it had seen
+before and stored in the database, it will set it as deactivated. The metadata 
and history of the
+DAG is kept for deactivated DAGs and when the DAG is re-added to the 
``DAGS_FOLDER`` it will be reactivated
+and the history will be visible. You cannot activate/deactivate DAGs via the 
UI or the API.
+It can only be done by removing files from the ``DAGS_FOLDER``. Once again, no 
data for historical runs of the
+DAG are lost when it is deactivated by the scheduler. Note that the ``Active`` 
tab in the Airflow UI
+refers to the DAGs that are not both ``Activated`` and ``Not paused``. So this 
might initially be a
 little confusing.
 
-You can't see the deactivated DAGs in the UI - you can sometimes see the 
historical runs, but when you try to
-see the information about those you will see the error that the DAG is missing.
+You can't see the deactivated DAGs in the UI. You can sometimes see the 
historical runs, but when you try to
+see the information about those, you will see an error indicating that the DAG 
is missing.
 
-You can also delete the DAG metadata from the metadata database using UI or 
API, but it does not
-always result in disappearing of the DAG from the UI - which might be also 
initially a bit confusing.
+You can also delete the DAG's metadata from the metadata database using the UI 
or the API, but it does not
+always result in the DAG disappearing from the UI - which might be a bit 
confusing at first.
 If the DAG is still in ``DAGS_FOLDER`` when you delete the metadata, the DAG 
will re-appear as
-Scheduler will parse the folder, only historical runs information for the DAG 
will be removed.
+the Scheduler will parse the folder. Only the information of historical runs 
for the DAG will be removed.
 
-This all means that if you want to actually delete a DAG and its all 
historical metadata, you need to do
+This all means that if you want to actually delete a DAG and all of its 
historical metadata, you need to do
 it in three steps:
 
-* pause the DAG
-* delete the historical metadata from the database, via UI or API
-* delete the DAG file from the ``DAGS_FOLDER`` and wait until it becomes 
inactive
+* Pause the DAG
+* Delete the historical metadata from the database, via the UI or the API
+* Delete the DAG's source file from the ``DAGS_FOLDER`` and wait until it 
becomes inactive

Review Comment:
   Ooph this is a really dense and incoherent paragraph. I'd rather rewrite the 
whole thing instead of fixing smaller typos. For example:
   
   ```rst
   Pausing a DAG
   -------------
   
   A DAG can be (un)paused in the main view of Airflow:
   ```
   
   
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/6249654/226296973-cc48a39d-65cd-45fa-9599-6d827841838e.png)
   
   ```rst
   A paused DAG will not run on its defined schedule, but will run when it is 
triggered manually. When a paused
   DAG is unpaused, missed scheduled runs during the period in which the DAG 
was paused will be run when
   ``catchup`` is set to ``True``.
   
   Deleting a DAG
   --------------
   
   A DAG can be removed by deleting the corresponding file. The DAG will 
disappear from the UI. However, DAG
   state/metadata such as task history is preserved in the database. When you 
add back the DAG file, all DAG
   state/metadata is available again.
   
   To also remove a DAG's state and metadata, press the "Delete DAG" button in 
the UI, or call the
   ``DELETE /dags/{dag_id}`` REST API endpoint:
   ```
   
   
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/6249654/226305506-58851037-1a5d-46a1-a666-96c08f8c687b.png)
   
   ```rst
   Deleting a DAG will remove all DAG state and metadata. Note that task log 
metadata is always preserved.
   ```
   
   A few reasons why I think the original paragraph should be rewritten:
   
   - The whole paragraph seems written for a developer of the Airflow library, 
not an average Airflow DAG writer. Docs should focus on the latter.
   - Stating things like "the user can choose to disable this functionality via 
the UI" should be backed up by a screenshot or explanation of where to find 
such functionality.
   - The higher the number of concepts introduced, the more difficult a piece 
of text becomes to understand. Therefore, I'd only use the terminology 
"pausing" and "deleting" DAGs, and not "deactivating".
   - I suggest splitting the paragraph into smaller paragraphs. Pausing and 
deleting DAGs are two different activities and mixing those in a single 
paragraph makes it harder to understand.
   
   @bramvandewalle WDYT?



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