uranusjr commented on code in PR #32983:
URL: https://github.com/apache/airflow/pull/32983#discussion_r1279998041


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docs/apache-airflow/core-concepts/executor/index.rst:
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@@ -77,4 +77,4 @@ There are two types of executor - those that run tasks 
*locally* (inside the ``s
 
 .. note::
 
-    Something that often confuses new users of Airflow is that they don't need 
to run a separate ``executor`` process. This is because the executor's logic 
runs *inside* the ``scheduler`` process - if you're running a scheduler, you're 
running the executor.
+    Something that often confuses new users of Airflow is that they don't need 
to run a separate ``executor`` process using one of the Local Executors or 
Remote Executors (because executor's logic runs *inside* the ``scheduler`` 
process and this logic will run the tasks locally or not depending the executor 
selected).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
       New Airflow users may assume they need to run a separate executor 
process using one of the Local or Remote Executors. This is not correct since 
the executor logic runs *inside* the scheduler process, and will run the tasks 
locally or not depending the executor selected.
   ```
   
   I needed to read the first part of the sentence several times to understand. 
Flipping the conditional may be useful…



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docs/apache-airflow/core-concepts/executor/index.rst:
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@@ -77,4 +77,4 @@ There are two types of executor - those that run tasks 
*locally* (inside the ``s
 
 .. note::
 
-    Something that often confuses new users of Airflow is that they don't need 
to run a separate ``executor`` process. This is because the executor's logic 
runs *inside* the ``scheduler`` process - if you're running a scheduler, you're 
running the executor.
+    Something that often confuses new users of Airflow is that they don't need 
to run a separate ``executor`` process using one of the Local Executors or 
Remote Executors (because executor's logic runs *inside* the ``scheduler`` 
process and this logic will run the tasks locally or not depending the executor 
selected).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
       New Airflow users may assume they need to run a separate executor 
process using one of the Local or Remote Executors. This is not correct since 
the executor logic runs *inside* the scheduler process, and will run the tasks 
locally or not depending the executor selected.
   ```
   
   I needed to read the first part of the sentence several times to understand. 
Flipping the conditional may be useful…



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