o-nikolas commented on code in PR #55743:
URL: https://github.com/apache/airflow/pull/55743#discussion_r2356069997


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airflow-core/docs/howto/sla-to-deadlines.rst:
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+ .. Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+    or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+    distributed with this work for additional information
+    regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+    to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+    "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+    with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+ ..   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+ .. Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+    software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+    "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+    KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+    specific language governing permissions and limitations
+    under the License.
+
+Migrating from SLA to Deadline Alerts
+=====================================
+
+Two different paradigms

Review Comment:
   I think you'd gone with caps titles in the other docs.
   ```suggestion
   Two Different Paradigms
   ```



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airflow-core/docs/howto/sla-to-deadlines.rst:
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+ .. Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+    or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+    distributed with this work for additional information
+    regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+    to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+    "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+    with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+ ..   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+ .. Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+    software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+    "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+    KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+    specific language governing permissions and limitations
+    under the License.
+
+Migrating from SLA to Deadline Alerts
+=====================================
+
+Two different paradigms
+-----------------------
+
+While the goal of the **SLA** and **Deadlines** features are very similar, 
they use two very different approaches
+which makes it difficult to present a universal migration guide. Instead, this 
guide will lay out the major
+differences and help you decide on the best approach for your use case.
+
+To begin with, we'll start by explaining the two approaches then go into how 
to find the right Deadline for your use case.
+
+SLA
+^^^
+
+When the dag run **finishes**, check the current time.  If the time is greater 
than (logical_date + sla) then
+execute ``sla_miss_callback``.  If the Dag run never finishes, the SLA is 
never checked.
+
+Deadlines
+^^^^^^^^^
+
+When a Dag run **starts**, calculate and store (:ref:`DeadlineReference 
<built-in-deadline-references>` + interval).
+Every pass of the scheduler loop (default 5 seconds, set by 
``scheduler_heartbeat_sec``) if any of those times have
+passed then execute ``callback(**kwargs)``.

Review Comment:
   Suggestion, feel free to ignore.
   
   ```suggestion
   The scheduler loop then periodically checks (default 5 seconds, set by 
``scheduler_heartbeat_sec``) if any of those times have
   passed then execute ``callback(**kwargs)``.
   ```



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airflow-core/docs/howto/sla-to-deadlines.rst:
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+ .. Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+    or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+    distributed with this work for additional information
+    regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+    to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+    "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+    with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+ ..   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+ .. Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+    software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+    "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+    KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+    specific language governing permissions and limitations
+    under the License.
+
+Migrating from SLA to Deadline Alerts
+=====================================
+
+Two different paradigms
+-----------------------
+
+While the goal of the **SLA** and **Deadlines** features are very similar, 
they use two very different approaches

Review Comment:
   Match the name in the title for the first usage?
   
   ```suggestion
   While the goal of the **SLA** and **Deadline Alerts** features are very 
similar, they use two very different approaches
   ```



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task-sdk/src/airflow/sdk/definitions/dag.py:
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@@ -335,7 +335,8 @@ class DAG:
         beyond this the scheduler will disable the DAG
     :param dagrun_timeout: Specify the duration a DagRun should be allowed to 
run before it times out or
         fails. Task instances that are running when a DagRun is timed out will 
be marked as skipped.
-    :param sla_miss_callback: DEPRECATED - The SLA feature is removed in 
Airflow 3.0, to be replaced with a new implementation in 3.1
+    :param sla_miss_callback: DEPRECATED - The SLA feature is removed in 
Airflow 3.0, to be replaced with DeadlineAlerts in 3.1
+    :param deadline: An optional DeadlineAlert for the Dag.

Review Comment:
   Are these changes meant to be in this docs PR?



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airflow-core/docs/howto/sla-to-deadlines.rst:
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+ .. Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+    or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+    distributed with this work for additional information
+    regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+    to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+    "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+    with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+ ..   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+ .. Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+    software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+    "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+    KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+    specific language governing permissions and limitations
+    under the License.
+
+Migrating from SLA to Deadline Alerts
+=====================================
+
+Two different paradigms
+-----------------------
+
+While the goal of the **SLA** and **Deadlines** features are very similar, 
they use two very different approaches
+which makes it difficult to present a universal migration guide. Instead, this 
guide will lay out the major

Review Comment:
   Don't under sell yourself in the docs. I know you want a hedge, but I think 
it sounds more official and trustworthy if we don't IMHO.
   
   ```suggestion
   While the goal of the **SLA** and **Deadline Alerts** features are very 
similar, they use two very different approaches, this guide will lay out the 
major
   ```



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