minor tweaks to david's much nicer words for walkthrough!

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Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/commit/bb87612c
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/tree/bb87612c
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/diff/bb87612c

Branch: refs/heads/0.6.0
Commit: bb87612c26a4d7de0241098917233371080942d0
Parents: 458ae4d
Author: Alex Heneveld <[email protected]>
Authored: Fri Sep 27 12:55:02 2013 +0100
Committer: Alex Heneveld <[email protected]>
Committed: Fri Sep 27 12:55:02 2013 +0100

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 docs/start/walkthrough/index.md | 37 +++++++++++++++++++++---------------
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/blob/bb87612c/docs/start/walkthrough/index.md
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diff --git a/docs/start/walkthrough/index.md b/docs/start/walkthrough/index.md
index 43c8391..7f6c640 100644
--- a/docs/start/walkthrough/index.md
+++ b/docs/start/walkthrough/index.md
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@ toc: /toc.json
 
 ## Intro
 
-Brooklyn makes it easy to describe the structure and management of 
sophisticated distributed applications, and then it makes it easy to launch 
them in a cloud, with on-going automated management.
+Brooklyn makes it easy to describe the structure and management of 
sophisticated distributed applications, 
+and then it makes it easy to launch them in a cloud, with on-going automated 
management.
 
 This walkthrough will set up a sample application which you can use as 
foundation for creating your own applications.
 
@@ -20,13 +21,16 @@ The sample application is a three tier web service, 
composed of:
 
 ## Download the Sample Project
 
-Use Maven to download the Brooklyn quickstart archetype, and to setup the 
'brooklyn-sample' directory and project. (Maven will automatically download 
Brooklyn and all dependencies.)
+If you'd like to follow these steps on your machine, you can use Maven to 
+download the Brooklyn quickstart archetype and setup a `brooklyn-sample` 
directory and project. 
+Maven will automatically download Brooklyn and all dependencies.
+You can of course follow this walkthrough without installing it on your 
machine ... yet!
 
 {% if SNAPSHOT %}
 
 {% highlight bash %}
-export BROOKLYN_VERSION=0.6.0-SNAPSHOT
-mvn archetype:generate \
+$ export BROOKLYN_VERSION=0.6.0-SNAPSHOT
+$ mvn archetype:generate \
     -DarchetypeGroupId=io.brooklyn \
     -DarchetypeArtifactId=brooklyn-archetype-quickstart \
     -DarchetypeVersion=${BROOKLYN_VERSION} \
@@ -35,17 +39,17 @@ mvn archetype:generate \
     -DartifactId=brooklyn-sample \
     -Dversion=0.1.0-SNAPSHOT \
     -Dpackage=com.acme.sample.brooklyn
-cd brooklyn-sample
+$ cd brooklyn-sample
 {% endhighlight %}
 
 *Note*: As this is a snapshot version of Brooklyn, the code above includes a 
`-DarchetypeCatalog` specification.
-This can be omitted for full versions, or if you already have a local `mvn 
install` of Brooklyn installed as described 
[here]({{site.url}}/dev/code/index.html).
+This can be omitted for release versions, or if you already have a local `mvn 
install` of Brooklyn installed as described 
[here]({{site.url}}/dev/code/index.html).
 
 {% else %}
 
 {% highlight bash %}
-export BROOKLYN_VERSION=0.6.0-SNAPSHOT
-mvn archetype:generate \
+$ export BROOKLYN_VERSION=0.6.0-SNAPSHOT
+$ mvn archetype:generate \
     -DarchetypeGroupId=io.brooklyn \
     -DarchetypeArtifactId=brooklyn-archetype-quickstart \
     -DarchetypeVersion=${BROOKLYN_VERSION} \
@@ -53,7 +57,7 @@ mvn archetype:generate \
     -DartifactId=brooklyn-sample \
     -Dversion=0.1.0-SNAPSHOT \
     -Dpackage=com.acme.sample.brooklyn
-cd brooklyn-sample
+$ cd brooklyn-sample
 {% endhighlight %}
 
 {% endif %}
@@ -72,22 +76,25 @@ public class ClusterWebServerDatabaseSample extends 
AbstractApplication {
 }
 {% endhighlight %}
 
-`.../brooklyn-sample/src/main/java/com/acme/sample/brooklyn/sample/app/ClusterWebServerDatabaseSample.java`
 provides a template to follow.
+The file `ClusterWebServerDatabaseSample.java` in 
`src/main/java/com/acme/sample/brooklyn/sample/app/` 
+provides a template to follow.
 
 
 ## Deploying the Application
 
-If you have not already done so, follow the section in the [Getting Started 
Guide]({{site.url}}/use/guide/quickstart/index.html) to create a 
`brooklyn.properties` file containing credentials for your preferred cloud 
provider. 
+If you have not already done so, follow the section in the 
+[Getting Started Guide]({{site.url}}/use/guide/quickstart/index.html) to 
create a `brooklyn.properties` 
+file containing credentials for your preferred cloud provider. 
 
 To launch this application, build the project and run the `start.sh` script in 
the resulting assembly:
 
 {% highlight bash %}
-mvn clean assembly:assembly
+$ mvn clean assembly:assembly
 
-cd target/brooklyn-sample-0.1.0-SNAPSHOT-dist/brooklyn-sample-0.1.0-SNAPSHOT/
+$ cd target/brooklyn-sample-0.1.0-SNAPSHOT-dist/brooklyn-sample-0.1.0-SNAPSHOT/
 
-./start.sh application \
-       --class com.acme.sample.brooklyn.ClusterWebServerDatabaseSample \
+$ ./start.sh application \
+    --class com.acme.sample.brooklyn.ClusterWebServerDatabaseSample \
     --location jclouds:aws-ec2:eu-west-1
 {% endhighlight %}
 

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