Updates to wording of Deployment section.

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Branch: refs/heads/0.5.0
Commit: bfa0de2f08c26328e19eee64018c6025268d7d1f
Parents: 1e29159
Author: David Toy <[email protected]>
Authored: Thu Apr 18 17:05:07 2013 +0100
Committer: David Toy <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Apr 22 12:52:48 2013 +0100

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@@ -8,18 +8,17 @@ Brooklyn's main emphasis is managing live applications (e.g 
auto-scaling, except
 
 ### Deployment
 
-Brooklyn enables single-click deployment of complex applications.
+Brooklyn enables single-click deployment of complex applications, while 
tying-in with other great tools, and reusing and complementing existing 
workflows.
 
+Use Brooklyn to create an Application Blueprint, instructing Brooklyn how to 
wire together your applications and components, customizing and extending them 
as needed. Share the blueprint with others (optionally using Brooklyn's Web 
Service Catalog) to allow them to single-click deploy your application onto the 
infrastructure of their choice.
 
 Brooklyn features:
 
-* out-of-the-box support for many common software entities.
+* out-of-the-box support for many common software components.
 * integration with jclouds, allowing deployment to the majority of public and 
private clouds, in addition to pools of fixed IP machines.
 * integration with Apache Whirr (and thereby Chef and Puppet), allowing 
deployment of well-known services such as Hadoop and elasticsearch (and you can 
still use POBS, plain-old-bash-scripts).
 * integration with PaaS's such as OpenShift, allowing use of PaaSes alongside 
self-built clusters, for maximum flexibility.
 
-Brooklyn works with and ties into other tools, adding the concepts of 
manageable clusters and fabrics.
-
 In DevOps fashion, Brooklyn allows applications and roll-outs to be version 
controlled, tested programatically, and reused across locations and contexts. 
Develop on localhost, then reuse the same application descriptor to deploy to 
QA, and then to your production environment.
 
 ### Management

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