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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: b48dae6759982140d77b76f828013779f73868c6
Parents: 20e497b
Author: Alex Heneveld <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Nov 6 23:41:10 2017 +0000
Committer: Alex Heneveld <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Nov 6 23:41:10 2017 +0000

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 guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md | 7 +++----
 guide/blueprints/policies.md                | 5 ++++-
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/blob/b48dae67/guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md
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diff --git a/guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md 
b/guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md
index 603c331..b8b94fe 100644
--- a/guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md
+++ b/guide/blueprints/_elect-primary-policies.md
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 
 There are a collection of policies, enrichers, and effectors to assist with 
common
-failover scenarios and more general anything which wants a primary elected and
-re-elected.
+failover scenarios and more generally anything which requires the election and 
re-election of a primary member.
 
 These can be used for:
 
@@ -48,7 +47,7 @@ The ElectPrimaryPolicy acts to keep exactly one of its 
children or members as pr
 A simple use case is where we have two children, call them North and South, 
and we wish for North to be primary.  If North fails, however, we want to 
promote and fail over to South.  This can be done by:
 
 * adding this policy at the parent
-* setting ` ha.primary.weight` on North
+* setting `ha.primary.weight` on North
 * optionally defining `promote` on North and South (if action is required 
there to promote it)
 * observing the `primary` sensor to see which is primary
 * optionally setting `propagate.primary.sensor: main.uri` to publish 
`main.uri` from whichever of North or South is active
@@ -63,7 +62,7 @@ If present, this will add the `PropagatePrimaryEnricher` 
enricher with those sen
 be propagated (but not effectors).
 For more sophisticated configuration, that enricher can be added and 
configured directly instead.  
 
-If no quorum.up or quorum.running is set on the entity, both will be set to a 
constant 1.
+If no `quorum.up` or `quorum.running` is set on the entity, both will be set 
to a constant 1.
 
 
 #### ElectPrimary Effector

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/blob/b48dae67/guide/blueprints/policies.md
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diff --git a/guide/blueprints/policies.md b/guide/blueprints/policies.md
index 33fcde3..f34fdf3 100644
--- a/guide/blueprints/policies.md
+++ b/guide/blueprints/policies.md
@@ -87,7 +87,10 @@ example of this policy in use.
 
 - org.apache.brooklyn.policy.ha.ServiceFailureDetector
 
-TODO
+The ServiceFailureDetector enricher detects problems and fires an 
`ha.entityFailed` (or other configurable sensor)
+for use by ServiceRestarter and ServiceReplacer.
+The [introduction to policies]({{book.path.docs}}/start/policies.md) shows a 
worked 
+example of this in use.
 
 
 #### SshMachineFailureDetector Policy

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