gnodet commented on code in PR #26035:
URL: https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/26035#discussion_r3913350841


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docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/commercial-camel-offerings.adoc:
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@@ -27,6 +27,10 @@ and support the delivery of the project from end to end.
 https://digitalchange.eu[Digital Change] is an Austrian consultancy and ISV 
specializing in system integration
 with Apache Camel and modern middleware.
 
+== https://www.eadx.com/apachecamel[EADX]
+
+https://www.eadx.com/apachecamel[EADX] offers worldwide services for Apache 
Camel through service centers in the Europe and Asia, with consulting available 
in English and German. Services focus on enterprise integration development 
with Apache Camel, managed service offerings, and commercial maintenance 
support for the Camel software.

Review Comment:
   Two minor text issues:
   
   1. **Grammar**: "in the Europe and Asia" — the article "the" shouldn't be 
used before continent names. Should be "in Europe and Asia".
   2. **Consistency**: "the Camel software" — every other entry on this page 
uses "Apache Camel" (or bare "Camel"). Using "the Camel software" is unique to 
this entry.
   
   ```suggestion
   https://www.eadx.com/apachecamel[EADX] offers worldwide services for Apache 
Camel through service centers in Europe and Asia, with consulting available in 
English and German. Services focus on enterprise integration development with 
Apache Camel, managed service offerings, and commercial maintenance support for 
Apache Camel.
   ```



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