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Erick Ramirez edited comment on CASSANDRA-16536 at 3/25/21, 9:32 AM:
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Below are some minor nits/suggestions.
 * Omit "processes" in:

 
{quote}*Automated node recovery processes* - basic operations 
{color:#de350b}-processes-{color} such as restart, replace node, or replace an 
instance are all automated.
{quote}
* Disambiguate "operators" in:

 

 
{quote}*Customizable containers* - applying containerization best practice, 
this enables {color:#de350b}*human*{color} operators to merge containers they 
have built with what’s offered in the {color:#de350b}*cass-*{color}operator so 
that they don’t have to deal with secrets/volumes.
{quote}
* I feel like _"... existing open source ..."_ is missing a word, maybe "tools"?

 

 
{quote}The operator leverages a number of existing open source 
{color:#de350b}*tools*{color} in the OSS ecosystem ...
{quote}
* Expand "RF" to "replication factor" to make it easier for new users to 
understand:

 

 
{quote}NetworkTopologyStrategy is automatically applied with appropriate 
{color:#de350b}-RF- *replication factor*{color} for system keyspaces.
{quote}
* Looks like a grammatical error in:

 

 
{quote}Well documentat{color:#de350b}-ion-*ed*{color} cloud storage classes, ...
{quote}
*  Consider using #cassandra-kubernetes in the last paragraph:

 
{quote}... by joining the {color:#de350b}*#cassandra-kubernetes*{color} channel.
{quote}
 Cheers!

P.S. Noting here that we [discussed on ASF 
Slack|https://the-asf.slack.com/archives/C01RY1LUPD5/p1616659232007700] 
scheduling this post for next week in preference for the World Party blog post 
(CASSANDRA-16537).


was (Author: flightc):
Below are some minor nits/suggestions.
 * Omit "processes" in:

{quote}*Automated node recovery processes* - basic operations 
{color:#de350b}-processes-{color} such as restart, replace node, or replace an 
instance are all automated.
{quote} * Disambiguate "operators" in:

{quote}*Customizable containers* - applying containerization best practice, 
this enables {color:#de350b}*human*{color} operators to merge containers they 
have built with what’s offered in the {color:#de350b}*cass-*{color}operator so 
that they don’t have to deal with secrets/volumes.
{quote} * I feel like _"... existing open source ..."_ is missing a word, maybe 
"tools"?

{quote}The operator leverages a number of existing open source 
{color:#de350b}*tools*{color} in the OSS ecosystem ...
{quote} * Expand "RF" to "replication factor" to make it easier for new users 
to understand:

{quote}NetworkTopologyStrategy is automatically applied with appropriate 
{color:#de350b}-RF- *replication factor*{color} for system keyspaces.
{quote} * Looks like a grammatical error in:

{quote}Well documentat{color:#de350b}-ion-*ed*{color} cloud storage classes, ...
{quote} *  Consider using #cassandra-kubernetes in the last paragraph:

{quote}... by joining the {color:#de350b}*#cassandra-kubernetes*{color} channel.
{quote}
 Cheers!

> BLOG - Post about Cassandra & Kubernetes - SIG Update #2
> --------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: CASSANDRA-16536
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CASSANDRA-16536
>             Project: Cassandra
>          Issue Type: Task
>          Components: Documentation/Blog
>            Reporter: Rahul Singh
>            Assignee: Michael Semb Wever
>            Priority: High
>              Labels: pull-request-available
>             Fix For: 4.0-beta5, 4.0
>
>         Attachments: image-2021-03-24-18-57-08-450.png
>
>
> We're getting another update up for the Cassandra & Kubernetes SIG 
>  
> [https://github.com/Anant/cassandra-website/blob/master/src/_posts/2021-03-26-cassandra-and-kubernetes-sig-update.markdown]
>  
>  



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