Author: nicolas
Date: Thu Jan 24 03:30:56 2008
New Revision: 614844
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=614844&view=rev
Log:
fix to broken link and bad english
Modified:
commons/sandbox/monitoring/trunk/PROPOSAL.html
Modified: commons/sandbox/monitoring/trunk/PROPOSAL.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/commons/sandbox/monitoring/trunk/PROPOSAL.html?rev=614844&r1=614843&r2=614844&view=diff
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--- commons/sandbox/monitoring/trunk/PROPOSAL.html (original)
+++ commons/sandbox/monitoring/trunk/PROPOSAL.html Thu Jan 24 03:30:56 2008
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.jamonapi.com";>JAMon</a> is a well known monitoring
toolkit, but lacks for a modular design
and a clean tooling (separation between code and tests..). It is driven by a
single individual, and as a
-result doesn't take advantage of an apache-like community driven
emulation.</li>
+result doesn't take advantage of an apache-like community based evolution and
developer collaboration.
<li><a href="http://moskito.anotheria.net/";>MoSKito</a> is nicely designed,
but requires some technical
inheritence and for this reason is too much intrusive. Its user community is
still tiny accoring to sourceforge statistics</li>
</ul>
