Author: bayard
Date: Mon Mar 29 03:29:26 2010
New Revision: 928582
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=928582&view=rev
Log:
Cutting some of the text. Feedback section unnecessary. Keeping the focus on
the novice reader not legal bureaucracy (components who differ must document
statement)
Modified:
commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml
Modified: commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml?rev=928582&r1=928581&r2=928582&view=diff
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--- commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml
(original)
+++ commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml Mon Mar
29 03:29:26 2010
@@ -28,15 +28,13 @@
<subsection name='Introduction'>
<p>
The <em>Apache Commons</em> project differs from many other Apache
projects because
- it is comprised of multiple, independently released components.
Therefore, the release procedure
- for an individual component needs to be documented so that component
authors follow consistent
- practices.
+ it is comprised of multiple, independently released components. The
common release procedure
+ for an individual component is documented here so that contributors
can easily move from
+ component to component.
</p>
<p>
- Individual components (such as Collections) might vary from these
practices
- but these steps should prove sufficient for the majority
- of cases. Any components which deviate substantially from this
procedure should document these
- deviations.
+ Individual components may vary from these practices, but these steps
should prove sufficient for the majority
+ of cases.
</p>
</subsection>
<subsection name='Documentation'>
@@ -50,14 +48,5 @@
</p>
</subsection>
</section>
- <section name='Feedback'>
- <p>
- Feedback - yes please!
- </p>
- <p>
- Comments, critiques and error reports -
- post them any and all to the dev mailing list at commons.apache.org.
Please prefix with [doc].
- </p>
- </section>
</body>
</document>
