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commit 5bd5bed3d9e7d6e5b9e075f81b17c37f855fd0b3
Author: Andrew Wetmore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Sat Jul 18 08:47:27 2020 -0300

    Update _index.md
    
    Minor text edits to fix grammatical issues like run-on sentences. Removed 
the "happy 20th anniversary" sentence about ASF, as it is now out of date.
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@@ -6,22 +6,19 @@ title: Apache Community Development - Welcome
 <a href="https://www.apache.org/events/current-event.html";><img 
src="https://www.apache.org/events/current-event-125x125.png"; style="float: 
right;"/></a>
 <h2>Apache Community Development!</h2>
 
-<br>
-
-<p>Mission: The Community Development project creates and provides tools,
-processes, and advice, to help open source software projects improve their own
+Mission: The Community Development project creates and provides tools,
+processes, and advice to help open-source software projects improve their own
 community health. We are, of course, primarily focused on Apache Software 
Foundation (ASF)
 projects. However, because we believe that the Apache Way is, in fact, the
 best way to manage a software project, we strive also to make these
-artifacts releasable to the open source community as a whole. </p>
+artifacts releasable to the open source community as a whole.
 
-<p>We do not focus on
+We do not focus on
 specific projects here, but rather on the common processes and policies
 called The Apache Way found in most Apache projects. Our goal is to help you
 <em>understand how the ASF works</em> and give you the confidence to 
participate
-in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
+in the specific Apache projects that interest you.
 
-<p>Happy Birthday ASF!  Join us in <a 
href="https://s.apache.org/ASF20thAnniversary";>celebrating the 20th anniversary 
of the ASF's founding</a>.</p>
 </div>
 
 <a name="Index-Startingpoints"></a>
@@ -44,20 +41,20 @@ in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
 <div class="row">
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>Newcomers to Apache</h4>
-        <p>If you are new to open source, our <a 
href="newcomers/index.html"><b>newcomers section</b></a> explains basic 
concepts, first steps to get started, and places to ask for help.</p>
-        <p>To get our software, see our <a 
href="https://projects.apache.org/projects.html?category";>categorized listing 
of all Apache projects</a>, which are <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/free/";><b>always free</b> to download and 
use</a>.</p>
+        <p>If you are new to open source, our <a 
href="newcomers/index.html"><b>newcomers section</b></a> explains basic 
concepts, first steps to get started, and where to ask for help.</p>
+        <p>To get our software, see our <a 
href="https://projects.apache.org/projects.html?category"; 
target="_blank">categorized listing of all Apache projects</a>, which are <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/free/";><b>always free</b> to download and 
use</a>.</p>
         <p>The ASF is a large organization made up of many separate projects: 
each community may have different ways of working, while still following the 
basic Apache Way process.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>Event Organizers and Speakers</h4>
         <p>We have a <a href="speakers/index.html">list of speaker 
resources</a> for conference organizers and speakers, including some useful 
Apache slides.</p>
-        <p>Producers should read our <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/events";>Event Branding Policy</a> 
for ticketed events, and we have some <a href="events/small-events.html">tips 
for organizing small, community events</a> about Apache projects.</p>
-        <p>The <a href="https://events.apache.org/event/calendar.html";>master 
event calendar</a> contains an aggregation of many different Apache-related 
events, including ApacheCon, BarCamps, and more.</p>
+        <p>Producers should read our <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/events";>Event Branding Policy</a> 
for ticketed events, and we have some <a href="events/small-events.html">tips 
for organizing small community events</a> about Apache projects.</p>
+        <p>The <a href="https://events.apache.org/event/calendar.html";>master 
event calendar</a> contains an aggregation of many different Apache-related 
events, including ApacheCon and BarCamps.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>The Foundation</h4>
-        <p>The Apache Software Foundation (ASF) is a <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/";>US 501(c)3 non-profit public 
charity</a>.  The Foundation is <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/governance/";>governed by a Board of 
Directors</a>, elected by our Membership, and we publish our <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/board/calendar.html";>monthly board 
meeting minutes</a>.</p>
-        <p>Our mission is to create software for the public good that we <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/free/";>give away for free</a>.  You can read how <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/governance/";>ASF and Apache projects are 
governed</a>; we <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html";>welcome your support 
to Apache in other ways</a>.</p>
+        <p>The Apache Software Foundation (ASF) is a <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/";>US 501(c)3 non-profit public 
charity</a>. The Foundation is <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/governance/";>governed by a Board of 
Directors</a>, elected by our Membership, and we publish our <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/board/calendar.html";>monthly board 
meeting minutes</a>.</p>
+        <p>Our mission is to create software for the public good that we <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/free/";>give away for free</a>. You can read how <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/governance/"; target="_blank">ASF and 
Apache projects are governed</a>. We <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html"; 
target="_blank">welcome your support to Apache in other ways</a>.</p>
     </div>
 </div>
 
@@ -65,21 +62,20 @@ in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
 <div class="row">
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>Open Source Contributors</h4>
-        <p>If you know a little about open source and want to understand how 
the ASF works our <a href="contributors/index.html">contributors section</a> is 
for you.</p>
+        <p>If you know a little about open source and want to understand how 
the ASF works, our <a href="contributors/index.html">contributors' section</a> 
is for you.</p>
         <p>We also have a collection of <a href="links.html">links</a> to 
relevant information.</p>
-        <p>Apache Committers should read our <a 
href="committers/index.html">committers section</a> and see the <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/dev/";>Developer Information site</a>.</p>
+        <p>Apache Committers should read our <a 
href="committers/index.html">committers' section</a> and see the <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/dev/";>Developer Information site</a>.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
           <h4>Pilot Mentoring Programme with India ICFOSS</h4>
-          <p>The Apache Software Foundation is now participating in a pilot 
project with India ICFOSS to provide mentoring for undergraduate and graduate 
students that have interest in learning how to participate in open source 
communities at ASF.
+          <p>The Apache Software Foundation participates in a pilot project 
with India ICFOSS to provide mentoring for undergraduate and graduate students 
who have interest in learning how to participate in open source communities at 
ASF.
           <br/><br/>
-          More information available at the <a 
href="mentoringprogramme-icfoss-pilot.html">Pilot Mentoring Programme</a> 
page.</p>
+          More information is available at the <a 
href="mentoringprogramme-icfoss-pilot.html">Pilot Mentoring Programme</a> 
page.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>How Apache works</h4>
-        <p>Our <a href="apache-way/apache-project-maturity-model.html">Apache 
Project Maturity Model</a> defines a structure for evaluating our projects 
(communities & technology), that can serve as an example for other communities 
as well.</p>
-        <p>Interested in learning how the ASF works as a Foundation? Our <a 
href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html";>how Apache works 
guide</a>
-        talks about the difference between ASF Members and project committers, 
who decides things (voting), how elections take place, how our infrastructure 
is setup, what is the board, what is a PMC, what's the philosophy behind the 
incubator.</p>
+        <p>Our <a href="apache-way/apache-project-maturity-model.html">Apache 
Project Maturity Model</a> defines a structure for evaluating our projects 
(communities & technology) that can serve as an example for other 
communities.</p>
+        <p>Interested in learning how the ASF works as a Foundation? Our <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html"; target="_blank"> how 
Apache works guide</a> talks about the difference between ASF Members and 
project committers, who decides things (voting), how elections take place, how 
our infrastructure is set up, what is the board, what is a PMC, and what's the 
philosophy behind the incubator.</p>
     </div>
 </div>
 
@@ -87,10 +83,10 @@ in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
 <div class="row">
     <div class="span4">
         <h4>How To Ask Questions</h4>
-        <p>All Apache projects use <a 
href="https://lists.apache.org/";>publicly archived mailing lists</a> that 
anyone may subscribe
-           to and/or ask questions related to that Apache project.  Most 
projects have a
-           [email protected] mailing list for technical discussions 
about the code, and a
-           user@ or users@ mailing list for questions about the product or 
features.
+        <p>All Apache projects use <a 
href="https://lists.apache.org/";>publicly-archived mailing lists</a> that 
anyone may subscribe
+           to. There you can ask questions related to that Apache project and 
gain a sense of its current activities and focus.  Most projects have a
+           `[email protected]` mailing list for technical discussions 
about the code, and a
+           `user@` or `users@` mailing list for questions about the product or 
features.
            <br/><br/>
            We have a <a href="/contributors/etiquette">Code of Conduct and 
Etiquette guidelines</a> to help you write good emails.
            <br/><br/>
@@ -99,7 +95,7 @@ in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
           <h4>Google Summer of Code program (GSoC)</h4>
-          <p>The Community Development project also manages the <a 
href="gsoc.html">ASF's participation in the Google Summer of Code program</a>. 
Each year, since 2005, we've taken on between 30 and 45 students. Many of these 
have gone on to be long term committers and even members of the foundation.
+          <p>The Community Development project also manages the <a 
href="gsoc.html">ASF's participation in the Google Summer of Code program</a>. 
Each year since 2005, we've taken on between 30 and 45 students. Many of these 
have gone on to become long-term committers to projects and even Members of the 
Foundation.
           <br/><br/>
           Read about a few of our <a href="mentoring/experiences.html">GSoC 
successes</a>. </p>
         <!--
@@ -109,8 +105,8 @@ in the specific Apache projects that interest you.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="span4">
           <h4>FAQ & Code of Conduct</h4>
-          <p>Please be nice!  The ASF has a <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/policies/conduct";>Code of Conduct</a> 
that we expect participants in our mailing lists and projects to abide by.</p>
-          <p>If you still haven't found what you are looking for, try our <a 
href="newbiefaq.html">FAQ</a>, send us an e-mail at [email protected], 
or read the <a 
href="https://lists.apache.org/[email protected]:lte=3M:";>Community
 mail archives</a>.</p>
+          <p>Please be nice! The ASF has a <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/policies/conduct";>Code of Conduct</a> 
that we expect participants in our mailing lists and projects to abide by.</p>
+          <p>If you still haven't found what you are looking for, try our <a 
href="newbiefaq.html">FAQ</a>, send us an e-mail at 
`[email protected]`, or read the <a 
href="https://lists.apache.org/[email protected]:lte=3M:"; 
target="_blank">Community mail archives</a>.</p>
     </div>
 </div>
 

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