tuxji commented on code in PR #90:
URL: https://github.com/apache/daffodil-site/pull/90#discussion_r889749658


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site/extensions.adoc:
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+:page-layout: page
+:url-asciidoctor: http://asciidoctor.org
+:keywords: plugins layering UDF charset
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// This file is written in AsciiDoc.
+//
+// If you can read this comment, your browser is not rendering asciidoc 
automatically.
+//
+// You need to install the asciidoc plugin to Chrome or Firefox
+// so that this page will be properly rendered for your viewing pleasure.
+//
+// You can get the plugins by searching the web for 'asciidoc plugin'
+//
+// You will want to change plugin settings to enable diagrams (they're off by 
default.)
+//
+// You need to view this page with Chrome or Firefox.
+//
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// When editing, please start each sentence on a new line.
+// See 
https://asciidoctor.org/docs/asciidoc-recommended-practices/#one-sentence-per-line[one
 sentence-per-line writing technique.]
+// This makes textual diffs of this file useful in a similar way to the way 
they work for code.
+//
+// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+
+= DFDL Language Extensions in Daffodil
+
+Daffodil contains numerous extensions to the DFDL v1.0 language.
+
+Many of these have been, or will be proposed for inclusion in a future version 
of the DFDL standard. 
+
+This page provides a central starting point for the documentation of these 
extension features.
+
+== About Daffodil Plugins
+
+To provide some new advanced format capabilities such as checksums, compressed 
or encoded data regions, and user-defined-functions, DFDL schemas sometimes 
must use Daffodil-specific extensions and incorporate Daffodil plugins that 
provide the small algorithmic aspects needed by these formats.
+
+There are 2 kinds of plugins today supported by Daffodil 3.3.0
+
+- Layering Transformer (e.g., unzip/zip, verify/recompute checksums)
+- User Defined Function (UDF) (e.g., convert mean-sea-level elevation to 
height-above-ellipsoid)
+
+There is one additional kind of plugin that will be supported by Daffodil 3.4.0
+
+- Character Set Definitions (e.g., a specific 5-bit charset used only by a 
certain format)
+
+One needs to think of plugins as being part of the DFDL schema of a format, 
not part of Daffodil.
+
+Different DFDL schemas for different kinds of data will need their own such 
plugins.
+Hence the plugins, like the DFDL schema files themselves, are used in 
applications as part of a specific data-processing flow.
+
+Keeping in the spirit of DFDL in describing a format declaratively, plugins 
need to be very small pieces of code (ex: a character set definition should be 
10 lines of code.)

Review Comment:
   I think it's fine to break a sentence across multiple lines as long as the 
next sentence begins on a new line (not immediately after the period 
punctuating the previous sentence).  We break long lines of code, so we should 
break long sentences as well.



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site/extensions.adoc:
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+:page-layout: page
+:url-asciidoctor: http://asciidoctor.org
+:keywords: plugins layering UDF charset
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// This file is written in AsciiDoc.
+//
+// If you can read this comment, your browser is not rendering asciidoc 
automatically.
+//
+// You need to install the asciidoc plugin to Chrome or Firefox
+// so that this page will be properly rendered for your viewing pleasure.
+//
+// You can get the plugins by searching the web for 'asciidoc plugin'
+//
+// You will want to change plugin settings to enable diagrams (they're off by 
default.)
+//
+// You need to view this page with Chrome or Firefox.
+//
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// When editing, please start each sentence on a new line.
+// See 
https://asciidoctor.org/docs/asciidoc-recommended-practices/#one-sentence-per-line[one
 sentence-per-line writing technique.]
+// This makes textual diffs of this file useful in a similar way to the way 
they work for code.
+//
+// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+
+= DFDL Language Extensions in Daffodil
+
+Daffodil contains numerous extensions to the DFDL v1.0 language.
+
+Many of these have been, or will be proposed for inclusion in a future version 
of the DFDL standard. 
+
+This page provides a central starting point for the documentation of these 
extension features.
+
+== About Daffodil Plugins
+
+To provide some new advanced format capabilities such as checksums, compressed 
or encoded data regions, and user-defined-functions, DFDL schemas sometimes 
must use Daffodil-specific extensions and incorporate Daffodil plugins that 
provide the small algorithmic aspects needed by these formats.
+
+There are 2 kinds of plugins today supported by Daffodil 3.3.0

Review Comment:
   Consider ending both this sentence and the following sentence at line 44 
with a colon as punctuation.



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site/extensions.adoc:
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,60 @@
+:page-layout: page
+:url-asciidoctor: http://asciidoctor.org
+:keywords: plugins layering UDF charset
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// This file is written in AsciiDoc.
+//
+// If you can read this comment, your browser is not rendering asciidoc 
automatically.
+//
+// You need to install the asciidoc plugin to Chrome or Firefox
+// so that this page will be properly rendered for your viewing pleasure.
+//
+// You can get the plugins by searching the web for 'asciidoc plugin'
+//
+// You will want to change plugin settings to enable diagrams (they're off by 
default.)
+//
+// You need to view this page with Chrome or Firefox.
+//
+// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+//
+// When editing, please start each sentence on a new line.
+// See 
https://asciidoctor.org/docs/asciidoc-recommended-practices/#one-sentence-per-line[one
 sentence-per-line writing technique.]
+// This makes textual diffs of this file useful in a similar way to the way 
they work for code.
+//
+// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
+
+= DFDL Language Extensions in Daffodil

Review Comment:
   That  other page talks about DFDL extensions while this page talks about 
extensions to Daffodil schemas (slightly more general).  Probably better to 
merge that page into this page than the other way around.



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