Startrekzky commented on code in PR #454:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/incubator-devlake-website/pull/454#discussion_r1124325649


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docs/Configuration/webhook.md:
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@@ -14,11 +14,17 @@ Go to the 'Data Connections' page. Create a webhook.
 
 We recommend that you give your webhook connection a unique name so that you 
can identify and manage where you have used it later.
 
-### Step 2 - Use Webhooks
+### Step 2 - Create webhooks connection
 
 Click on Generate POST URL, and you will find four webhook URLs. Copy the ones 
that suit your usage into your CI or issue-tracking systems. You can always 
come back to the webhook page to copy the URLs later on.

Review Comment:
   Click on `Generate POST URL`, and you will find three webhook URLs.



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versioned_docs/version-v0.15/UserManuals/DORA.md:
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@@ -64,113 +66,123 @@ Calculating DORA metrics requires three key entities: 
**changes**, **deployments
 In the next section, we'll demonstrate how to configure DevLake to implement 
DORA metrics for the aforementioned example team.
 
 ### Collect GitHub & Jira data via `blueprint`
+
 1. Visit the config-ui at `http://localhost:4000`
-2. Create a `blueprint`, let's name it "Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a 
GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`
-![](https://i.imgur.com/lpPRZ6v.png)
+2. Create a project: `project1`. And then create a `blueprint`, let's name it 
"Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`
+   ![project1](/img/ConfigUI/project1.png)
+   ![](https://i.imgur.com/lpPRZ6v.png)
 
 3. Select Jira boards and GitHub repos to collect, click `Next Step`
-![](https://i.imgur.com/Ko38n6J.png)
+   ![](https://i.imgur.com/Ko38n6J.png)
 
 4. Click `Add Transformation` to configure for DORA metrics
-![](https://i.imgur.com/Lhcu2DE.png)
+   ![](https://i.imgur.com/Lhcu2DE.png)
 
 5. To make it simple, fields with a ![](https://i.imgur.com/rrLopFx.png) label 
are DORA-related configurations for every data source. Via these fields, you 
can define what are "incidents" and "deployments" for each data source. After 
all data connections have been configured, click `Next Step`
+
    - This team uses Jira issue types `Crash` and `Incident` as "incident", so 
choose the two types in field "incident". Jira issues in these two types will 
be transformed to "incidents" in DevLake.
    - This team uses the GitHub action jobs named `deploy` and 
`build-and-deploy` to deploy, so type in `(?i)deploy` to match these jobs. 
These jobs will be transformed to "deployments" in DevLake.
-   ![](https://i.imgur.com/1JZA2xn.png)
-   
+     ![](https://i.imgur.com/1JZA2xn.png)
+
    Note: The following example shows where to find GitHub action jobs. It's 
easy to mix them up with GitHub workflows.
    ![](https://i.imgur.com/Y2hchEh.png)
-   
 
 6. Choose sync frequency, click 'Save and Run Now' to start data collection. 
The time to completion varies by data source and depends on the volume of data.
-![](https://i.imgur.com/zPkfzGr.png)
+   ![](https://i.imgur.com/zPkfzGr.png)
 
 For more details, please refer to our [blueprint 
manuals](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/UserManuals/ConfigUI/Tutorial).
 
 ### Collect CircleCI data via `webhook`
 
 Using CircleCI as an example, we demonstrate how to actively push data to 
DevLake using the Webhook approach, in cases where DevLake doesn't have a 
plugin specific to that tool to pull data from your data source.
 
-7. Visit "Data Connections" page in config-ui and select "Issue/Deployment 
Incoming Webhook".
+7. Go to the 'Data Connections' page. Create a webhook.
+
+![webhook-add-data-connections](/img/ConfigUI/webhook-add-data-connections.png)

Review Comment:
   Add indent?



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docs/DORA.md:
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@@ -5,47 +5,49 @@ description: >
   DORA Metrics
 ---
 
-
 This document describes everything you need to know about DORA, and 
implementing this powerful and practical framework in DevLake.
 
 ## What are DORA metrics?
+
 Created six years ago by a team of researchers, DORA stands for "DevOps 
Research & Assessment" and is the answer to years of research, having examined 
thousands of teams, seeking a reliable and actionable approach to understanding 
the performance of software development teams.
 
 DORA has since become a standardized framework focused on the stability and 
velocity of development processes, one that avoids the more controversial 
aspects of productivity and individual performance measures.
 
-There are two key clusters of data inside DORA: Velocity and Stability. The 
DORA framework is focused on keeping them in context with each other, as a 
whole, rather than as independent variables, making the data more challenging 
to misinterpret or abuse. 
+There are two key clusters of data inside DORA: Velocity and Stability. The 
DORA framework is focused on keeping them in context with each other, as a 
whole, rather than as independent variables, making the data more challenging 
to misinterpret or abuse.
+
+Within velocity are two core metrics:
 
-Within velocity are two core metrics: 
 - [Deployment 
Frequency](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics/DeploymentFrequency): Number 
of successful deployments to production, how rapidly is your team releasing to 
users?
 - [Lead Time for 
Changes](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics/LeadTimeForChanges): How long 
does it take from commit to the code running in production? This is important, 
as it reflects how quickly your team can respond to user requirements.
 
 Stability is composed of two core metrics:
+
 - [Median Time to Restore 
Service](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics/MTTR): How long does it take 
the team to properly recover from a failure once it is identified?
 - [Change Failure Rate](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics/CFR): How 
often are your deployments causing a failure?
 
 ![](https://i.imgur.com/71EUflb.png)
 
-To make DORA even more actionable, there are well-established benchmarks to 
determine if you are performing at "Elite", "High", "Medium", or "Low" levels. 
Inside DevLake, you will find the benchmarking table available to assess and 
compare your own projects.  
+To make DORA even more actionable, there are well-established benchmarks to 
determine if you are performing at "Elite", "High", "Medium", or "Low" levels. 
Inside DevLake, you will find the benchmarking table available to assess and 
compare your own projects.
 
 ## Why is DORA important?
-DORA metrics help teams and projects measure and improve software development 
practices to consistently deliver reliable products, and thus happy users!
 
+DORA metrics help teams and projects measure and improve software development 
practices to consistently deliver reliable products, and thus happy users!
 
 ## How to implement DORA metrics with Apache DevLake?
 
 You can set up DORA metrics in DevLake in a few steps:
+
 - **Install**: [Getting 
Started](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/GettingStarted)
 - **Collect**: Collect data via blueprint
-    - In the blueprint, select the data you wish to collect, and make sure you 
have selected the data required for DORA metrics
-    - Configure DORA-related transformation rules to define `deployments` and 
`incidents`
-    - Select a sync frequency for your data, save and run the blueprint.
+  - In the blueprint, select the data you wish to collect, and make sure you 
have selected the data required for DORA metrics
+  - Configure DORA-related transformation rules to define `deployments` and 
`incidents`
+  - Select a sync frequency for your data, save and run the blueprint.
 - **Report**: DevLake provides a built-in DORA dashboard. See an example 
screenshot below or check out our [live 
demo](https://grafana-lake.demo.devlake.io/grafana/d/qNo8_0M4z/dora?orgId=1).
-![DORA Dashboard](https://i.imgur.com/y1pUIsk.png)
+  ![DORA Dashboard](https://i.imgur.com/y1pUIsk.png)
 
 DevLake now supports Jenkins, GitHub Action and GitLabCI as data sources for 
`deployments` data; Jira, GitHub issues, and TAPD as the sources for 
`incidents` data; Github PRs, GitLab MRs as the sources for `changes` data.
 
-If your CI/CD tools are not listed on the [Supported Data 
Sources](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/SupportedDataSources) page, have no 
fear! DevLake provides incoming webhooks to push your `deployments` data to 
DevLake. The webhook configuration doc can be found 
[here](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Configuration/webhook/).
-
+If your CI/CD tools are not listed on the [Supported Data 
Sources](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/next/Overview/SupportedDataSources) 
page, have no fear! DevLake provides incoming webhooks to push your 
`deployments` data to DevLake. The webhook configuration doc can be found 
[here](https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Configuration/webhook/).

Review Comment:
   You can't use absolute URL of the next version of docs. You should remove 
the `/next/` part.
   
   The solution is to use relative URL, then Docusaurus won't throw error and 
the URL will not break after the doc freeze.



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versioned_docs/version-v0.15/UserManuals/ConfigUI/webhook.md:
##########
@@ -14,11 +14,17 @@ Go to the 'Data Connections' page. Create a webhook.
 
 We recommend that you give your webhook connection a unique name so that you 
can identify and manage where you have used it later.
 
-### Step 2 - Use Webhooks
+### Step 2 - Create webhooks connection
 
 Click on Generate POST URL, and you will find four webhook URLs. Copy the ones 
that suit your usage into your CI or issue-tracking systems. You can always 
come back to the webhook page to copy the URLs later on.

Review Comment:
   Click on `Generate POST URL`, and you will find three webhook URLs.



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docs/DORA.md:
##########
@@ -64,123 +66,132 @@ Calculating DORA metrics requires three key entities: 
**changes**, **deployments
 In the next section, we'll demonstrate how to configure DevLake to implement 
DORA metrics for the aforementioned example team.
 
 ### Collect GitHub & Jira data via `blueprint`
+
 1. Visit the config-ui at `http://localhost:4000`
-2. Create a `blueprint`, let's name it "Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a 
GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`
-![](https://i.imgur.com/lpPRZ6v.png)
+2. Create a project: `project1`. And then create a `blueprint`, let's name it 
"Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`

Review Comment:
   Create a project: `project1`. Go to `project1`and create a `blueprint`...



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versioned_docs/version-v0.15/UserManuals/DORA.md:
##########
@@ -64,113 +66,123 @@ Calculating DORA metrics requires three key entities: 
**changes**, **deployments
 In the next section, we'll demonstrate how to configure DevLake to implement 
DORA metrics for the aforementioned example team.
 
 ### Collect GitHub & Jira data via `blueprint`
+
 1. Visit the config-ui at `http://localhost:4000`
-2. Create a `blueprint`, let's name it "Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a 
GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`
-![](https://i.imgur.com/lpPRZ6v.png)
+2. Create a project: `project1`. And then create a `blueprint`, let's name it 
"Blueprint for DORA", add a Jira and a GitHub connection. Click `Next Step`

Review Comment:
   Text change:
   Create a project: `project1`. Go to `project1` and create a `blueprint`...



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