Segun-Ogundipe commented on a change in pull request #4614:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/incubator-dolphinscheduler/pull/4614#discussion_r566334150



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File path: README.md
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@@ -15,38 +15,38 @@ Dolphin Scheduler Official Website
 [![CN doc](https://img.shields.io/badge/文档-中文版-blue.svg)](README_zh_CN.md)
 
 
-### Design features:
+### Design Features:
 
-Dolphin Scheduler is a distributed and easy-to-extend visual DAG workflow 
scheduling system. It dedicates to solving the complex dependencies in data 
processing to make the scheduling system `out of the box` for the data 
processing process.
+DolphinScheduler is a distributed and extensible workflow scheduler platform 
with powerful DAG visual interfaces, dedicated to solving complex job 
dependencies in the data pipeline and providing multiple types of jobs 
available `out of the box`. 
 
 Its main objectives are as follows:
 
  - Associate the tasks according to the dependencies of the tasks in a DAG 
graph, which can visualize the running state of the task in real-time.
- - Support many task types: Shell, MR, Spark, SQL (MySQL, PostgreSQL, hive, 
spark SQL), Python, Sub_Process, Procedure, etc.
- - Support process scheduling, dependency scheduling, manual scheduling, 
manual pause/stop/recovery, support for failed retry/alarm, recovery from 
specified nodes, Kill task, etc.
- - Support the priority of process & task, task failover, and task timeout 
alarm or failure.
- - Support process global parameters and node custom parameter settings.
- - Support online upload/download of resource files, management, etc. Support 
online file creation and editing.
- - Support task log online viewing and scrolling, online download log, etc.
- - Implement cluster HA, decentralize Master cluster and Worker cluster 
through Zookeeper.
+ - Support various task types: Shell, MR, Spark, SQL (MySQL, PostgreSQL, hive, 
spark SQL), Python, Sub_Process, Procedure, etc.
+ - Support scheduling of workflows and dependencies, manual scheduling to 
pause/stop/recovery task, support failure task retry/alarm, recovery specified 
nodes from failure, kill task, etc.

Review comment:
       `pause/stop/recovery` should be `pause/stop/recover`

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File path: README.md
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@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ 
dolphinscheduler-dist/target/apache-dolphinscheduler-incubating-${latest.release
 ### Thanks
 
 Dolphin Scheduler is based on a lot of excellent open-source projects, such as 
google guava, guice, grpc, netty, ali bonecp, quartz, and many open-source 
projects of Apache and so on.
-We would like to express our deep gratitude to all the open-source projects 
which contribute to making the dream of Dolphin Scheduler comes true. We hope 
that we are not only the beneficiaries of open-source, but also give back to 
the community. Besides, we expect the partners who have the same passion and 
conviction to open-source will join in and contribute to the open-source 
community!
+We would like to express our deep gratitude to all the open-source projects 
assist Dolphin Scheduler. We hope that we are not only the beneficiaries of 
open-source, but also give back to the community. Besides, we expect the 
partners who have the same passion and conviction to open-source could join in 
and contribute to the open-source community!

Review comment:
       `We would like to express our deep gratitude to all the open-source 
projects assist Dolphin Scheduler` should be `We would like to express our deep 
gratitude to all the open-source projects used in Dolphin Scheduler`

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File path: README.md
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@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ 
dolphinscheduler-dist/target/apache-dolphinscheduler-incubating-${latest.release
 ### Thanks
 
 Dolphin Scheduler is based on a lot of excellent open-source projects, such as 
google guava, guice, grpc, netty, ali bonecp, quartz, and many open-source 
projects of Apache and so on.
-We would like to express our deep gratitude to all the open-source projects 
which contribute to making the dream of Dolphin Scheduler comes true. We hope 
that we are not only the beneficiaries of open-source, but also give back to 
the community. Besides, we expect the partners who have the same passion and 
conviction to open-source will join in and contribute to the open-source 
community!
+We would like to express our deep gratitude to all the open-source projects 
assist Dolphin Scheduler. We hope that we are not only the beneficiaries of 
open-source, but also give back to the community. Besides, we expect the 
partners who have the same passion and conviction to open-source could join in 
and contribute to the open-source community!

Review comment:
       `we expect the partners who have the same passion and conviction to 
open-source could join in and contribute to the open-source community!` should 
be `we hope that partners who have the same enthusiasm and passion for open 
source could join in and contribute to the open-source community!`

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File path: README.md
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@@ -15,38 +15,38 @@ Dolphin Scheduler Official Website
 [![CN doc](https://img.shields.io/badge/文档-中文版-blue.svg)](README_zh_CN.md)
 
 
-### Design features:
+### Design Features:
 
-Dolphin Scheduler is a distributed and easy-to-extend visual DAG workflow 
scheduling system. It dedicates to solving the complex dependencies in data 
processing to make the scheduling system `out of the box` for the data 
processing process.
+DolphinScheduler is a distributed and extensible workflow scheduler platform 
with powerful DAG visual interfaces, dedicated to solving complex job 
dependencies in the data pipeline and providing multiple types of jobs 
available `out of the box`. 
 
 Its main objectives are as follows:
 
  - Associate the tasks according to the dependencies of the tasks in a DAG 
graph, which can visualize the running state of the task in real-time.
- - Support many task types: Shell, MR, Spark, SQL (MySQL, PostgreSQL, hive, 
spark SQL), Python, Sub_Process, Procedure, etc.
- - Support process scheduling, dependency scheduling, manual scheduling, 
manual pause/stop/recovery, support for failed retry/alarm, recovery from 
specified nodes, Kill task, etc.
- - Support the priority of process & task, task failover, and task timeout 
alarm or failure.
- - Support process global parameters and node custom parameter settings.
- - Support online upload/download of resource files, management, etc. Support 
online file creation and editing.
- - Support task log online viewing and scrolling, online download log, etc.
- - Implement cluster HA, decentralize Master cluster and Worker cluster 
through Zookeeper.
+ - Support various task types: Shell, MR, Spark, SQL (MySQL, PostgreSQL, hive, 
spark SQL), Python, Sub_Process, Procedure, etc.
+ - Support scheduling of workflows and dependencies, manual scheduling to 
pause/stop/recovery task, support failure task retry/alarm, recovery specified 
nodes from failure, kill task, etc.

Review comment:
       `recovery specified nodes` should be `recover specified nodes`




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