KassieZ commented on code in PR #1210:
URL: https://github.com/apache/doris-website/pull/1210#discussion_r1806433403


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@@ -24,115 +24,51 @@ specific language governing permissions and limitations
 under the License.
 -->
 
-在 K8s 上从零开始部署一整套完整的 Doris 存算分离集群分为两部分: 第一部分部署 
`Doris-Operator`;第二部分下发部署存算分离集群的相关资源 `DorisDisaggregatedMetaService`  和 
`DorisDisaggregatedCluster` 。 `DorisDisaggregatedMetaService` 资源部署元数据组件; 
`DorisDisaggregatedCluster` 资源部署存算 sql 解析组件与计算组件。
-
-## 安装 Operator
+在 K8s 上部署存算分离集群需要提前部署好 fdb。如果是虚机部署需确保部署的虚机能够被 k8s 
集群上的服务访问,部署请参考存算分离部署文档中[部署前准备阶段介绍](../../../../compute-storage-decoupled/before-deployment);如需要在
 k8s 上部署请参考 [fdb 在 k8s 上部署](install-fdb.md)。
+部署 doris 存算分离集群分为两部分:Doris-Operator 及其相关依赖权限部署;doris 存算分离集群定制化资源部署。
+## 第一步:部署 Operator
 
 1. 下发资源定义:
 
 ```

Review Comment:
   please add the fence block , such as ```yaml 



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+---
+{
+"title": "部署 FoundationDB",
+"language": "zh-CN"
+}
+---
+
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+
+[FDB](https://apple.github.io/foundationdb/#overview) 是 apple 
公司开发的分布式强一致性存储结构化数据的数据库。 Doris 存算分离模式使用 FDB 作为元数据存储,通过 meta-service 组件来管理 FDB 
中的元数据。 Kubernetes 上部署存算分离集群需要提前部署 FDB 服务,推荐两种部署方式:在虚机(包括物理机)上直接部署; 使用 
[fdb-kubernetes-operator](https://github.com/FoundationDB/fdb-kubernetes-operator)
 部署 fdb 。
+虚机部署请参考 doris 
存算分离官方文档[部署前准备部分](../../../../compute-storage-decoupled/before-deployment)搭建 
FDB 集群。部署前请确保 FDB 有被 Doris 部署的 Kubernetes 集群访问的能力,即 Kubernetes 的 node 与 FDB 
部署的机器在同一个子网。 FDB 官方提供 Kubernetes 上部署运维管理服务 
[fdb-kubernetes-operator](https://github.com/FoundationDB/fdb-kubernetes-operator)
 。
+以下简述使用 fdb-kubernetes-operator 最新版本部署 fdb 使用样例。
+
+## 部署 fdb 相关资源定义

Review Comment:
   FDB , Apple , Node, Doris . Please unify the capitalization of these words 



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i18n/zh-CN/docusaurus-plugin-content-docs/current/install/cluster-deployment/k8s-deploy/compute-storage-decoupled/install-quickstart.md:
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@@ -24,115 +24,51 @@ specific language governing permissions and limitations
 under the License.
 -->
 
-在 K8s 上从零开始部署一整套完整的 Doris 存算分离集群分为两部分: 第一部分部署 
`Doris-Operator`;第二部分下发部署存算分离集群的相关资源 `DorisDisaggregatedMetaService`  和 
`DorisDisaggregatedCluster` 。 `DorisDisaggregatedMetaService` 资源部署元数据组件; 
`DorisDisaggregatedCluster` 资源部署存算 sql 解析组件与计算组件。
-
-## 安装 Operator
+在 K8s 上部署存算分离集群需要提前部署好 fdb。如果是虚机部署需确保部署的虚机能够被 k8s 
集群上的服务访问,部署请参考存算分离部署文档中[部署前准备阶段介绍](../../../../compute-storage-decoupled/before-deployment);如需要在
 k8s 上部署请参考 [fdb 在 k8s 上部署](install-fdb.md)。

Review Comment:
   K8s or k8s, please unify the capitalization
   



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@@ -24,28 +24,33 @@ specific language governing permissions and limitations
 under the License.
 -->
 
-MS is the abbreviation of Meta Service, the Compute-storage decoupled 
component of Doris, which provides metadata management and query services. The 
configuration field in `DorisDisaggregatedMetaService` is MS.
+MS is the abbreviation of MetaService, the storage and computing separation 
component of Doris, which provides metadata management and query services. The 
configuration field in `DorisDisaggregatedClulster` is metaService.
 
 ## Simplest configuration
 
 MS service is a stateless service and is usually deployed in active-standby 
mode. The simplest configuration is as follows:
 
 ```yaml
 spec:
-  ms:
+  metaService:
     image: {msImage}
-    replicas: 2
+    fdb:
+      configMapNamespaceName:
+        name: {foundationdbConfigmap}
+        namespace: {namespace}
 ```
 
 Among them, `{msImage}` is the version of the MS service you want to deploy.
+`{foundationdbConfigmap}` 为 k8s 部署的 FDB 服务提供的访问 configmap 。

Review Comment:
   Please use EN description



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@@ -56,11 +61,37 @@ spec:
       memory: 4Gi
 ```
 
-Update the modified configuration to the [metadata management 
resources](../install-quickstart.md#Install DorisDisaggregatedMetaService). for 
Compute-storage decoupled that need to be deployed.
+Update the modified configuration to the [metadata management resources for 
storage and computing separation that need to be 
deployed](install-quickstart.md#step-2-quickly-deploy-a-storage-and-computing-separation-cluster).
+
+## 配置 FDB
+
+FDB 集群在同一套 k8s 集群上搭建,并且能够获取其所在的 namespace 和 configmap,则使用如下配置:

Review Comment:
   Please use EN description



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