dataroaring opened a new pull request, #3943:
URL: https://github.com/apache/doris-website/pull/3943

   ## What
   
   A readability pass on the **Overview (§1)** and **Core Concepts (§2)** prose 
in the partitioning & bucketing concepts page (`basic-concepts`):
   
   - Shorter, declarative sentences (split 40+ word run-ons).
   - Active voice with Doris as the subject ("Doris distributes…", "Doris reads 
different buckets in parallel" instead of "the system…").
   - Drop translated-source patterns: "organize the data … in an orderly 
manner", "a reasonable X design brings the following benefits".
   
   No technical meaning changed.
   
   ## Scope
   
   - Touches only §1–§2 prose. Sections 3–7 (the CREATE TABLE walkthrough, 
design recommendations, and operational SHOW commands) are left as-is for now.
   - Does **not** change the page title, intro, or example trim in PR #3940; 
the two PRs edit different regions of the same file.
   - EN + 中文; applies to both `docs/` and `versioned_docs/version-4.x`. (The 中文 
was already close to natural; only the few verbose sentences were tightened for 
parity.)
   
   ## Why
   
   This is dense, translated-from-source concept prose. The page's 
landing/structure was made default-first in #3940; this brings its core concept 
prose to the same clarity bar.


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