gianm commented on a change in pull request #170:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid-website-src/pull/170#discussion_r500452656
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File path: index.html
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@@ -30,35 +30,35 @@ <h2>
<div class="features">
<div class="feature">
<span class="fa fa-chart-line fa"></span>
- <h5>A modern cloud-native, stream-native, analytics database</h5>
+ <h5>Power data applications and products</h5>
Review comment:
IMO the _first_ thing here should still be about how Druid is a fast
modern analytics database. To me the "powering data application" thing is an
important point and should be the very next (second) one.
i.e. I'm suggesting the first point is "what Druid is" and the second point
is "what Druid is typically used for"
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File path: package-lock.json
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@@ -15,14 +15,14 @@
"integrity":
"sha512-nne9/IiQ/hzIhY6pdDnbBtz7DjPTKrY00P/zvPSm5pOFkl6xuGrGnXn/VtTNNfNtAfZ9/1RtehkszU9qcTii0Q=="
},
"ajv": {
- "version": "5.5.2",
- "resolved": "https://registry.npmjs.org/ajv/-/ajv-5.5.2.tgz";,
- "integrity": "sha1-c7Xuyj+rZT49P5Qis0GtQiBdyWU=",
+ "version": "6.12.5",
Review comment:
What are all these changes about? Are they intentional?
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File path: package.json
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@@ -21,6 +21,6 @@
"gulp": "3.9.1",
"gulp-sass": "4.0.1",
"natives": "^1.1.6",
- "node-sass": "4.9.2"
+ "node-sass": "^4.14.1"
Review comment:
What's this change about? Is it intentional?
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File path: technology.md
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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ canonical: 'https://druid.apache.org/technology'
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Apache Druid is an open source distributed data store.
-Druid’s core design combines ideas from [data
warehouses](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data_warehouse), [timeseries
databases](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_series_database), and [search
systems](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Full-text_search) to create a unified
system for real-time analytics for a broad range of [use cases](/use-cases).
Druid merges key characteristics of each of the 3 systems into its ingestion
layer, storage format, querying layer, and core architecture.
+Druid’s core design combines ideas from [data
warehouses](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data_warehouse), [timeseries
databases](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_series_database), and [search
systems](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Full-text_search) to create a powerful
query serving layer for a broad range of [use cases](/use-cases). Druid merges
key characteristics of each of the 3 systems into its ingestion layer, storage
format, querying layer, and core architecture.
Review comment:
IMO change this to:
> to create a powerful, high performance analytics database
It's a "what Druid is" sentence, and that is a "high performance real-time
analytics database".
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File path: use-cases.md
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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ sectionid: use-cases
canonical: 'https://druid.apache.org/use-cases'
---
-## Real-time analytics and intelligence
+## Power data applications
Review comment:
This headline is too specific for the content below (many of the use
cases are data applications, but not all of them are).
Suggest rewording it to something like:
> Power real-time analytics, data applications, and more
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