techdocsmith commented on a change in pull request #11541:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/11541#discussion_r683786173



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-All data in Druid is organized into _segments_, which are data files each of 
which may have up to a few million rows.
-Loading data in Druid is called _ingestion_ or _indexing_, and consists of 
reading data from a source system and creating
-segments based on that data.
+Loading data in Druid is called _ingestion_ or _indexing_. When you ingest 
data into Druid, Druid reads the data from your source system and stores it in 
data files called _segments_. In general, segment files contain a few million 
rows.
 
-In most ingestion methods, the Druid 
[MiddleManager](../design/middlemanager.md) processes
-(or the [Indexer](../design/indexer.md) processes) load your source data. One 
exception is
-Hadoop-based ingestion, where this work is instead done using a Hadoop 
MapReduce job on YARN (although MiddleManager or Indexer
-processes are still involved in starting and monitoring the Hadoop jobs). 
+For most ingestion methods, the Druid 
[MiddleManager](../design/middlemanager.md) processes or the 
[Indexer](../design/indexer.md) processes load your source data. One exception 
is
+Hadoop-based ingestion, which uses a Hadoop MapReduce job on YARN 
MiddleManager or Indexer processes to start and monitor Hadoop jobs. 
 
-Once segments have been generated and stored in [deep 
storage](../dependencies/deep-storage.md), they are loaded by Historical 
processes. 
-For more details on how this works, see the [Storage 
design](../design/architecture.md#storage-design) section 
-of Druid's design documentation.
+After Druid creates segments and stores them in [deep 
storage](../dependencies/deep-storage.md), Historical processes load them to 
respond to queries. See the [Storage 
design](../design/architecture.md#storage-design) section of the Druid design 
documentation for more information.
 
-## How to use this documentation
+This topic and the following topics describe ingestion concepts and 
information that apply to all [ingestion methods](#ingestion-methods):
+- [Druid data model](./data-model.md) introduces concepts of datasources, 
primary timestamp, dimensions, and metrics.
+- [Data rollup](./rollup.md) describes rollup as a concept and provides 
suggestions to maximize the benefits of rollup.
+- [Partitioning](./partitioning.md) describes time chunk and secondary 
partitioning in Druid.
+- [Ingestion spec reference](./ingestion-spec.md) provides a reference for the 
configuration options in the ingestion spec.
 
-This **page you are currently reading** provides information about universal 
Druid ingestion concepts, and about
-configurations that are common to all [ingestion methods](#ingestion-methods).
-
-The **individual pages for each ingestion method** provide additional 
information about concepts and configurations
-that are unique to each ingestion method.
-
-We recommend reading (or at least skimming) this universal page first, and 
then referring to the page for the
-ingestion method or methods that you have chosen.
+For additional information about concepts and configurations that are unique 
to each ingestion method, see the topic for the ingestion method.
 
 ## Ingestion methods
 
-The table below lists Druid's most common data ingestion methods, along with 
comparisons to help you choose
+The tables below list Druid's most common data ingestion methods, along with 
comparisons to help you choose

Review comment:
       There is nowhere in the docs that describes a supervisor 😞 . I added my 
own brief definition.




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