kfaraz commented on code in PR #13028:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/13028#discussion_r964920670


##########
docs/development/extensions-contrib/prometheus.md:
##########
@@ -58,15 +74,34 @@ be provided as a JSON file.  Additionally, this mapping 
specifies which dimensio
 histogram timers to use Seconds as the base unit.  Timers which do not use 
seconds as a base unit can use the `conversionFactor` to set
 the base time unit. If the user does not specify their own JSON file, a 
default mapping is used.  All
 metrics are expected to be mapped. Metrics which are not mapped will not be 
tracked.
+
 Prometheus metric path is organized using the following schema:
-`<druid metric name> : { "dimensions" : <dimension list>, "type" : 
<timer|counter|gauge>, conversionFactor: <conversionFactor>, "help" : <help 
text>,}`
-e.g.
-`query/time" : { "dimensions" : ["dataSource", "type"], "conversionFactor": 
1000.0, "type" : "timer", "help": "Seconds taken to complete a query."}`
+
+```json
+<druid metric name> : { 
+  "dimensions" : <dimension list>, 
+  "type" : <timer|counter|gauge>, 
+  "conversionFactor": <conversionFactor>, 
+  "help" : <help text>
+}
+```
+
+For example:
+```json
+"query/time" : { 
+  "dimensions" : ["dataSource", "type"],
+  "type" : "timer",
+  "conversionFactor": 1000.0,
+  "help": "Seconds taken to complete a query."
+}
+```
 
 For metrics which are emitted from multiple services with different 
dimensions, the metric name is prefixed with
-the service name.
-e.g.
-`"coordinator-segment/count" : { "dimensions" : ["dataSource"], "type" : 
"gauge" },
- "historical-segment/count" : { "dimensions" : ["dataSource", "tier", 
"priority"], "type" : "gauge" }`
+the service name. For example:
+
+```json
+"coordinator-segment/count" : { "dimensions" : ["dataSource"], "type" : 
"gauge" },
+"historical-segment/count" : { "dimensions" : ["dataSource", "tier", 
"priority"], "type" : "gauge" }
+```
  
-For most use-cases, the default mapping is sufficient.
+For most use cases, the default mapping is sufficient.

Review Comment:
   Good one 😄 !



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docs/development/extensions-contrib/prometheus.md:
##########
@@ -28,22 +28,38 @@ To use this Apache Druid extension, 
[include](../../development/extensions.md#lo
 ## Introduction
 
 This extension exposes [Druid 
metrics](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/operations/metrics.html) for 
collection by a Prometheus server (https://prometheus.io/).
+
 Emitter is enabled by setting `druid.emitter=prometheus` 
[configs](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/configuration/index.html#emitting-metrics)
 or include `prometheus` in the composing emitter list. 
 
 ## Configuration
 
 All the configuration parameters for the Prometheus emitter are under 
`druid.emitter.prometheus`.
 
-|property|description|required?|default|
-|--------|-----------|---------|-------|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.strategy`|The strategy to expose prometheus 
metrics. Default strategy `exporter` would expose metrics for scraping purpose. 
Only peon task (short-lived jobs) need to use `pushgateway` 
strategy.|yes|exporter|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.port`|The port on which to expose the prometheus 
HTTPServer. Required if using exporter strategy.|no|none|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.namespace`|Optional metric namespace. Must match 
the regex `[a-zA-Z_:][a-zA-Z0-9_:]*`|no|"druid"|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.dimensionMapPath`|JSON file defining the Prometheus 
metric type, desired dimensions, help text, and conversionFactor for every 
Druid metric.|no|Default mapping provided. See below.|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addHostAsLabel`|Flag to include the hostname as a 
prometheus label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addServiceAsLabel`|Flag to include the druid 
service name (e.g. `druid/broker`, `druid/coordinator`, etc.) as a prometheus 
label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.pushGatewayAddress`|Pushgateway address. Required 
if using Pushgateway strategy|no|none|
+| property                                      | description                  
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                          | required? | default                 
             |
+|-----------------------------------------------|----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|-----------|--------------------------------------|
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.strategy`           | The strategy to expose 
prometheus metrics. <br/>Should be one of `exporter` and `pushgateway`. Default 
strategy `exporter` would expose metrics for scraping purpose. Peon tasks 
(short-lived jobs) should use `pushgateway` strategy. | yes       | exporter    
                         |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.port`               | The port on which to expose 
the prometheus HTTPServer. Required if using `exporter` strategy.               
                                                                                
                                           | no        | none                   
              |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.namespace`          | Optional metric namespace. 
Must match the regex `[a-zA-Z_:][a-zA-Z0-9_:]*`                                 
                                                                                
                                            | no        | druid                 
               |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.dimensionMapPath`   | JSON file defining the 
Prometheus metric type, desired dimensions, help text, and conversionFactor for 
every Druid metric.                                                             
                                                | no        | Default mapping 
provided. See below. |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.addHostAsLabel`     | Flag to include the hostname 
as a prometheus label.                                                          
                                                                                
                                          | no        | false                   
             |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.addServiceAsLabel`  | Flag to include the druid 
service name (e.g. `druid/broker`, `druid/coordinator`, etc.) as a prometheus 
label.                                                                          
                                               | no        | false              
                  |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.pushGatewayAddress` | Pushgateway address. 
Required if using `pushgateway` strategy.                                       
                                                                                
                                                  | no        | none            
                     |
+
+### Override properties for Peon Tasks
+
+Since peon tasks are created dynamically by MiddleManagers, it's not able to 
use `exporter` strategy for these tasks to let prometheus read metrics from 
fixed addresses.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Peon tasks are created dynamically by middle managers and have dynamic host 
and port addresses. Since the `exporter` strategy allows Prometheus to read 
only from a fixed address, it cannot be used for peon tasks.
   ```
   
   Tried to simplify the language a bit.



##########
docs/development/extensions-contrib/prometheus.md:
##########
@@ -28,22 +28,38 @@ To use this Apache Druid extension, 
[include](../../development/extensions.md#lo
 ## Introduction
 
 This extension exposes [Druid 
metrics](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/operations/metrics.html) for 
collection by a Prometheus server (https://prometheus.io/).
+
 Emitter is enabled by setting `druid.emitter=prometheus` 
[configs](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/configuration/index.html#emitting-metrics)
 or include `prometheus` in the composing emitter list. 
 
 ## Configuration
 
 All the configuration parameters for the Prometheus emitter are under 
`druid.emitter.prometheus`.
 
-|property|description|required?|default|
-|--------|-----------|---------|-------|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.strategy`|The strategy to expose prometheus 
metrics. Default strategy `exporter` would expose metrics for scraping purpose. 
Only peon task (short-lived jobs) need to use `pushgateway` 
strategy.|yes|exporter|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.port`|The port on which to expose the prometheus 
HTTPServer. Required if using exporter strategy.|no|none|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.namespace`|Optional metric namespace. Must match 
the regex `[a-zA-Z_:][a-zA-Z0-9_:]*`|no|"druid"|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.dimensionMapPath`|JSON file defining the Prometheus 
metric type, desired dimensions, help text, and conversionFactor for every 
Druid metric.|no|Default mapping provided. See below.|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addHostAsLabel`|Flag to include the hostname as a 
prometheus label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addServiceAsLabel`|Flag to include the druid 
service name (e.g. `druid/broker`, `druid/coordinator`, etc.) as a prometheus 
label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.pushGatewayAddress`|Pushgateway address. Required 
if using Pushgateway strategy|no|none|
+| property                                      | description                  
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                          | required? | default                 
             |
+|-----------------------------------------------|----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|-----------|--------------------------------------|
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.strategy`           | The strategy to expose 
prometheus metrics. <br/>Should be one of `exporter` and `pushgateway`. Default 
strategy `exporter` would expose metrics for scraping purpose. Peon tasks 
(short-lived jobs) should use `pushgateway` strategy. | yes       | exporter    
                         |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.port`               | The port on which to expose 
the prometheus HTTPServer. Required if using `exporter` strategy.               
                                                                                
                                           | no        | none                   
              |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.namespace`          | Optional metric namespace. 
Must match the regex `[a-zA-Z_:][a-zA-Z0-9_:]*`                                 
                                                                                
                                            | no        | druid                 
               |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.dimensionMapPath`   | JSON file defining the 
Prometheus metric type, desired dimensions, help text, and conversionFactor for 
every Druid metric.                                                             
                                                | no        | Default mapping 
provided. See below. |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.addHostAsLabel`     | Flag to include the hostname 
as a prometheus label.                                                          
                                                                                
                                          | no        | false                   
             |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.addServiceAsLabel`  | Flag to include the druid 
service name (e.g. `druid/broker`, `druid/coordinator`, etc.) as a prometheus 
label.                                                                          
                                               | no        | false              
                  |
+| `druid.emitter.prometheus.pushGatewayAddress` | Pushgateway address. 
Required if using `pushgateway` strategy.                                       
                                                                                
                                                  | no        | none            
                     |
+
+### Override properties for Peon Tasks
+
+Since peon tasks are created dynamically by MiddleManagers, it's not able to 
use `exporter` strategy for these tasks to let prometheus read metrics from 
fixed addresses.
+So, these tasks need to be configured to use `pushgateway` strategy to push 
metrics from Druid to prometheus gateway.
+
+If this emitter is configured to use `exporter` strategy globally, some above 
configurations need to be overridden in the MiddleManager's configuration file 
for peon tasks as shown below.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   If this emitter is configured to use `exporter` strategy globally, some of 
the above configurations need to be overridden in the middle manager so that 
spawned peon tasks can still use the `pushgateway` strategy.
   ```



##########
docs/development/extensions-contrib/prometheus.md:
##########
@@ -28,22 +28,38 @@ To use this Apache Druid extension, 
[include](../../development/extensions.md#lo
 ## Introduction
 
 This extension exposes [Druid 
metrics](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/operations/metrics.html) for 
collection by a Prometheus server (https://prometheus.io/).
+
 Emitter is enabled by setting `druid.emitter=prometheus` 
[configs](https://druid.apache.org/docs/latest/configuration/index.html#emitting-metrics)
 or include `prometheus` in the composing emitter list. 
 
 ## Configuration
 
 All the configuration parameters for the Prometheus emitter are under 
`druid.emitter.prometheus`.
 
-|property|description|required?|default|
-|--------|-----------|---------|-------|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.strategy`|The strategy to expose prometheus 
metrics. Default strategy `exporter` would expose metrics for scraping purpose. 
Only peon task (short-lived jobs) need to use `pushgateway` 
strategy.|yes|exporter|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.port`|The port on which to expose the prometheus 
HTTPServer. Required if using exporter strategy.|no|none|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.namespace`|Optional metric namespace. Must match 
the regex `[a-zA-Z_:][a-zA-Z0-9_:]*`|no|"druid"|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.dimensionMapPath`|JSON file defining the Prometheus 
metric type, desired dimensions, help text, and conversionFactor for every 
Druid metric.|no|Default mapping provided. See below.|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addHostAsLabel`|Flag to include the hostname as a 
prometheus label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.addServiceAsLabel`|Flag to include the druid 
service name (e.g. `druid/broker`, `druid/coordinator`, etc.) as a prometheus 
label.|no|false|
-|`druid.emitter.prometheus.pushGatewayAddress`|Pushgateway address. Required 
if using Pushgateway strategy|no|none|
+| property                                      | description                  
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                          | required? | default                 
             |

Review Comment:
   Style:
   I think I prefer the original formatting style. Having the columns aligned 
is good, but it becomes difficult to read once the text begins to wrap. Content 
written in the older style can be easily read through without having to 
consciously skip the whitespaces.



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