FrankChen021 commented on code in PR #13084: URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/13084#discussion_r970244717
########## docs/tutorials/docker.md: ########## @@ -22,9 +22,10 @@ title: "Docker" ~ under the License. --> -In this quickstart, we will download the Apache Druid image from [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com/r/apache/druid) and set it up on a single machine using [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) and [Docker Compose](https://docs.docker.com/compose/). The cluster will be ready to load data after completing this initial setup. +This quickstart guides you through the steps to download the Apache Druid image from [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com/r/apache/druid) and deploy it on a single machine using [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) and [Docker Compose](https://docs.docker.com/compose/). +After you finish the initial setup, the cluster will be ready to load data. -Before beginning the quickstart, it is helpful to read the [general Druid overview](../design/index.md) and the [ingestion overview](../ingestion/index.md), as the tutorials will refer to concepts discussed on those pages. Additionally, familiarity with [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) is recommended. +Before beginning the quickstart, it is helpful to read the [general Druid overview](../design/index.md) and the [ingestion overview](../ingestion/index.md), because the tutorials refer to concepts discussed on those pages. It also helps to be familiar with [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) is recommended. Review Comment: ```suggestion Before beginning the quickstart, it is helpful to read the [general Druid overview](../design/index.md) and the [ingestion overview](../ingestion/index.md), because the tutorials refer to concepts discussed on those pages. It also helps to be familiar with [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started). ``` -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
