writer-jill commented on code in PR #13245:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/13245#discussion_r1011653009


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docs/operations/auth-ldap.md:
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@@ -22,182 +23,279 @@ title: "LDAP auth"
   ~ under the License.
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+You can use [Lightweight Directory Access Protocol 
(LDAP)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol) to 
secure access to Apache Druid. This topic describes how to set up Druid 
authentication and authorization with LDAP and LDAP over TLS (LDAPS). The 
examples on this page show the configuration for an Active Directory LDAP 
system.
 
-This page describes how to set up Druid user authentication and authorization 
through LDAP. The first step is to enable LDAP authentication and authorization 
for Druid. You then map an LDAP group to roles and assign permissions to roles.
+The first step is to enable LDAP authentication and authorization for Druid. 
You then map an LDAP group to Druid roles and assign permissions to those 
roles. After you've completed this configuration you can optionally choose to 
enable LDAPS to make LDAP traffic confidential and secure.
 
-## Enable LDAP in Druid
+## Prerequisites
 
-Before starting, verify that the active directory is reachable from the Druid 
Master servers. Command line tools such as `ldapsearch` and `ldapwhoami`, which 
are included with OpenLDAP, are useful for this testing. 
+Before you start to configure LDAP for Druid, test your LDAP connection and 
perform a sample search.
 
-### Check the connection
+### Check your LDAP connection
 
-First test that the basic connection and user credential works. For example, 
given a user `[email protected]`, try:
+Verify that your LDAP connection is working by testing it with user 
credentials. For example, the following command tests the connection for the 
user `[email protected]`. Insert your LDAP server IP address and substitute 
`389` for the port number of your LDAP instance, if different.

Review Comment:
   Updated.



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