kfaraz commented on code in PR #14225:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/14225#discussion_r1188127763


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docs/data-management/automatic-compaction.md:
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@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ The following properties are automatically set by the 
Coordinator:
 * `context`: Set according to the user-provided `taskContext`.
 
 Compaction tasks fetch all [relevant 
segments](compaction.md#compaction-io-configuration) prior to launching any 
subtasks,
-_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to maximize performance
-and minimize disk usage of the `compact` tasks launched by auto-compaction:
+_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to non-null values to

Review Comment:
   Maybe use the word `field` instead of `item`.



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docs/data-management/automatic-compaction.md:
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@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ The following properties are automatically set by the 
Coordinator:
 * `context`: Set according to the user-provided `taskContext`.
 
 Compaction tasks fetch all [relevant 
segments](compaction.md#compaction-io-configuration) prior to launching any 
subtasks,

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Compaction tasks typically fetch all [relevant 
segments](compaction.md#compaction-io-configuration) prior to launching any 
subtasks,
   ```



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docs/data-management/automatic-compaction.md:
##########
@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ The following properties are automatically set by the 
Coordinator:
 * `context`: Set according to the user-provided `taskContext`.
 
 Compaction tasks fetch all [relevant 
segments](compaction.md#compaction-io-configuration) prior to launching any 
subtasks,
-_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to maximize performance
-and minimize disk usage of the `compact` tasks launched by auto-compaction:
+_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to non-null values to
+maximize performance and minimize disk usage of the `compact` tasks launched 
by auto-compaction:
 
-- [`granularitySpec`](compaction.md#compaction-granularity-spec). All three 
values must be set to non-null values: `segmentGranularity`, 
`queryGranularity`, and `rollup`.
+- [`granularitySpec`](compaction.md#compaction-granularity-spec), including 
all three of `segmentGranularity`, `queryGranularity`, and `rollup`

Review Comment:
   Slight rephrase:
   ```suggestion
   - [`granularitySpec`](compaction.md#compaction-granularity-spec), with 
non-null values for each of `segmentGranularity`, `queryGranularity`, and 
`rollup`.
   ```



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docs/data-management/automatic-compaction.md:
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@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ The following properties are automatically set by the 
Coordinator:
 * `context`: Set according to the user-provided `taskContext`.
 
 Compaction tasks fetch all [relevant 
segments](compaction.md#compaction-io-configuration) prior to launching any 
subtasks,
-_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to maximize performance
-and minimize disk usage of the `compact` tasks launched by auto-compaction:
+_unless_ the following items are all set. It is strongly recommended to set 
all of these items to non-null values to

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   _unless_ the following fields are all set to non-null values. It is strongly 
recommended to set these fields to 
   ```



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