Repository: flex-sdk
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  refs/heads/develop 11d60dae2 -> cf1d2edb9


FLEX-34785 Minor improvements to the README file.


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Branch: refs/heads/develop
Commit: cf1d2edb9b0ae16b7c6c6168248f221414516777
Parents: 11d60da
Author: Mihai Chira <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Mar 23 21:18:23 2015 +0100
Committer: Mihai Chira <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Mar 23 21:18:23 2015 +0100

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 README | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flex-sdk/blob/cf1d2edb/README
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diff --git a/README b/README
index 93e839e..a2e2210 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ The Apache Flex SDK
 ===================
 
 The Apache Flex SDK is the evolution of the popular Adobe Flex SDK. The Apache
-Flex SDK is an application development framework for easily building Flash
-based applications for mobile devices, web browsers, and desktop platforms.
+Flex SDK is an application development framework for easily building 
Flash-based
+applications for mobile devices, web browsers, and desktop platforms.
 Currently supported platforms include:
 
     Microsoft Windows
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Prepare your system
 
 Before building the Apache Flex SDK you must install the following software and
 set the corresponding environment variables. Make sure to use absolute paths,
-relative paths will result in build errors.
+as relative paths will result in build errors.
 
 The environment variables PLAYERGLOBAL_HOME, AIR_HOME, FLASHPLAYER_DEBUGGER,
 TLF_HOME, BLAZEDS_HOME and ADOBE_EXTENSION_MANAGER can also be set in a
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ The Adobe Flash Player content debuggers can be found here:
 This version of the Apache Flex SDK was certified for use with Adobe Flash
 Player 11.1, and is compatible with version 10.2 and up. It has been tested
 with versions 11.1, 11.7, 13.0 and 16.0 on Windows and Mac. It has been
-compiled, but not fully tested, against other Adobe Flash Player versions.
+compiled, but not fully tested, with other Adobe Flash Player versions.
 It has not been fully tested on Linux.
 
 On Windows, set FLASHPLAYER_DEBUGGER to the absolute path including the
@@ -195,8 +195,8 @@ versions of the Adobe Flash Player can be found in the 
section
 'Adobe Flash Player Version Support' below.
 
 * 6)
-The build scripts assume that the source code folder containing the Apache Flex
-Text Layout Framework root folder ('flex-tlf') is at the same level as the SDK
+The build scripts assume that the root folder containing the source code for
+Apache Flex Text Layout Framework ('flex-tlf') is at the same level as the SDK
 root folder ('flex-sdk'). See 'Getting the source code', below. If this is not
 the case on your system, then you must set the TLF_HOME environment variable to
 point to your TLF root folder. If you are using a released artifact, the
@@ -226,9 +226,9 @@ and set ADOBE_EXTENSION_MANAGER to the absolute path of
 On Linux, no Adobe Extension Manager exists.
 
 * 8)
-The build scripts assume that the source code folder containing the Apache Flex
-BlazeDS root folder ('flex-blazeds') is at the same level as the SDK
-root folder ('flex-sdk'). See 'Getting the source code', below. If this is not
+The build scripts assume that the root folder containing the source code for 
Apache
+Flex BlazeDS ('flex-blazeds') is at the same level as the SDK root folder
+('flex-sdk'). See 'Getting the source code', below. If this is not
 the case on your system, then you must set the BLAZEDS_HOME environment 
variable
 to point to your BLAZEDS root folder. If you are using a released artifact, the
 source should be included in the artifact, so setting BLAZEDS_HOME is not
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ To create an SDK for Flash Builder or any other IDE, run:
     ant -f installer.xml
     
 If you want to set the Flash Player and AIR versions to something other
-than their defaults, pass the verisons to the ant script like so:
+than their defaults, pass the versions to the ant script like so:
 
      ant -f installer.xml -Dflash.sdk.version=16.0 -Dair.sdk.version=16.0
 

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