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commit faca201808bb2a6141962978e0d2ae76970cb053
Author: Justin Mclean <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Tue Aug 27 15:36:37 2024 +1000

    [Minor] Update README.md for clarity (#4697)
    
    ### What changes were proposed in this pull request?
    
    Fixed some phrasing and sentence structure.
    
    ### Why are the changes needed?
    
    For clarity.
    
    Fix: # N/A
    
    ### Does this PR introduce _any_ user-facing change?
    
    No
    
    ### How was this patch tested?
    
    N/A
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 README.md | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 9b2282510..94f1a1b9f 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
 ## Introduction
 
-Apache Gravitino is a high-performance, geo-distributed, and federated 
metadata lake. It manages the metadata directly in different sources, types, 
and regions. It also provides users with unified metadata access for data and 
AI assets.
+Apache Gravitino is a high-performance, geo-distributed, and federated 
metadata lake. It manages metadata directly in different sources, types, and 
regions and provides users with unified metadata access for data and AI assets.
 
 ![Gravitino Architecture](docs/assets/gravitino-architecture.png)
 
@@ -43,15 +43,15 @@ Gravitino aims to provide several key features:
 
 ## Contributing to Apache Gravitino
 
-Gravitino is open source software available under the Apache 2.0 license. For 
information on how to contribute to Gravitino please see the [Contribution 
guidelines](CONTRIBUTING.md).
+Gravitino is open source software available under the Apache 2.0 license. For 
information on how to contribute to Gravitino, please see the [Contribution 
guidelines](CONTRIBUTING.md).
 
 ## Online documentation
 
-You can find the latest Gravitino documentation in the [doc folder](docs). 
This README file only contains basic setup instructions.
+The latest Gravitino documentation is in the [doc folder](docs). This README 
file only contains basic setup instructions.
 
 ## Building Apache Gravitino
 
-You can build Gravitino using Gradle. Currently you can build Gravitino on 
Linux and macOS, Windows isn't supported.
+You can build Gravitino using Gradle. Currently, you can build Gravitino on 
Linux and macOS, and Windows isn't supported.
 
 To build Gravitino, please run:
 
@@ -77,13 +77,13 @@ to build a compressed distribution package.
 
 The directory `distribution` contains the generated binary distribution 
package.
 
-For the details of building and testing Gravitino, please see [How to build 
Gravitino](docs/how-to-build.md).
+Please see [How to build Gravitino](docs/how-to-build.md) for details on 
building and testing Gravitino.
 
 ## Quick start
 
 ### Configure and start the Apache Gravitino server
 
-If you already have a binary distribution package, go to the directory of the 
decompressed package.
+If you already have a binary distribution package, go to the decompressed 
package directory.
 
 Before starting the Gravitino server, please configure the Gravitino server 
configuration file. The
 configuration file, `gravitino.conf`, is in the `conf` directory and follows 
the standard property file format. You can modify the configuration within this 
file.
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ To stop the Gravitino server, please run:
 ./bin/gravitino.sh stop
 ```
 
-Alternatively, to run the Gravitino server in frontend, please run:
+Alternatively, to run the Gravitino server in the frontend, please run:
 
 ```shell
 ./bin/gravitino.sh run
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ And press `CTRL+C` to stop the Gravitino server.
 
 ### Gravitino Iceberg REST catalog service
 
-Gravitino provides Iceberg REST catalog service to manage Iceberg, please 
refer to [Gravitino Iceberg REST catalog service](docs/iceberg-rest-service.md) 
for more details.
+Gravitino provides Iceberg REST catalog service to manage Iceberg. For more 
details, please refer to [Gravitino Iceberg REST catalog 
service](docs/iceberg-rest-service.md).
 
 ### Using Trino with Apache Gravitino
 
@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ Gravitino provides a Trino connector to access the 
metadata in Gravitino. To use
 
 ## License
 
-Gravitino is under the Apache License Version 2.0, See the [LICENSE](LICENSE) 
for the details.
+Gravitino is licensed under the Apache License Version 2.0. For details, see 
the [LICENSE](LICENSE).
 
 ## ASF Incubator disclaimer
 
-Apache Gravitino is an effort undergoing incubation at The Apache Software 
Foundation (ASF), sponsored by the Apache Incubator. Incubation is required of 
all newly accepted projects until a further review indicates that the 
infrastructure, communications, and decision making process have stabilized in 
a manner consistent with other successful ASF projects. While incubation status 
is not necessarily a reflection of the completeness or stability of the code, 
it does indicate that the proje [...]
+Apache Gravitino is an effort undergoing incubation at The Apache Software 
Foundation (ASF), sponsored by the Apache Incubator. Incubation is required for 
all newly accepted projects until a further review indicates that the 
infrastructure, communications, and decision making process have stabilized in 
a manner consistent with other successful ASF projects. While incubation status 
is not necessarily a reflection of the completeness or stability of the code, 
it does indicate that the proj [...]
 
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