justinmclean commented on code in PR #5726:
URL: https://github.com/apache/gravitino/pull/5726#discussion_r1872202158


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docs/how-to-install.md:
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@@ -6,145 +6,170 @@ license: "This software is licensed under the Apache 
License version 2."
 
 ## Install Apache Gravitino from scratch
 
+### Prerequisites
+
+If you have not installed Java, install it and configure the `JAVA_HOME` 
environment variable.
+After installation, you can run the `${JAVA_HOME}/bin/java -version` command 
to check the Java version.
+
 :::note
-Apache Gravitino supports running on Java 8, 11, and 17. Make sure you have 
Java installed and
-`JAVA_HOME` configured correctly. To confirm the Java version, run the
-`${JAVA_HOME}/bin/java -version` command.
+Gravitino supports running on Java 8, 11, and 17.
 :::
 
-The Gravitino package comprises both the Gravitino server and the Gravitino 
Iceberg REST server. You can manage these servers independently or run them 
concurrently on a single server.
-
-### Get the Apache Gravitino binary distribution package
-
-Before installing Gravitino, make sure you have the Gravitino binary 
distribution package. You can download the latest Gravitino binary distribution 
package from [GitHub](https://github.com/apache/gravitino/releases).
-You can also build it yourself by following the instructions in [How to Build 
Gravitino](./how-to-build.md).
-
-  - If you build Gravitino yourself using the `./gradlew compileDistribution` 
command, you can find the Gravitino binary distribution package in the 
`distribution/package` directory.
-
-  - If you build Gravitino yourself using the `./gradlew assembleDistribution` 
command, you can get the compressed Gravitino binary distribution package with 
the name `gravitino-<version>-bin.tar.gz` in the `distribution` directory with 
sha256 checksum file `gravitino-<version>-bin.tar.gz.sha256`.
-
-The Gravitino binary distribution package contains the following files:
-
-```text
-|── ...
-└── distribution/package
-    |── bin/
-    |   ├── gravitino.sh                        # Gravitino server Launching 
scripts.
-    |   └── gravitino-iceberg-rest-server.sh    # Gravitino Iceberg REST 
server Launching scripts.
-    |── catalogs
-    |   └── hadoop/                             # Apache Hadoop catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── hive/                               # Apache Hive catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── jdbc-doris/                         # JDBC doris catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── jdbc-mysql/                         # JDBC MySQL catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── jdbc-postgresql/                    # JDBC PostgreSQL catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── kafka/                              # Apache Kafka PostgreSQL 
catalog dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── lakehouse-iceberg/                  # Apache Iceberg catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |   └── lakehouse-paimon/                   # Apache Paimon catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
-    |── conf/                                   # All configurations for 
Gravitino.
-    |   ├── gravitino.conf                      # Gravitino server and 
Gravitino Iceberg REST server configuration.
-    |   ├── gravitino-iceberg-rest-server.conf  # Gravitino server 
configuration.
-    |   ├── gravitino-env.sh                    # Environment variables, etc., 
JAVA_HOME, GRAVITINO_HOME, and more.
-    |   └── log4j2.properties                   # log4j configuration for the 
Gravitino server and Gravitino Iceberg REST server.
-    |── libs/                                   # Gravitino server 
dependencies libraries.
-    |── logs/                                   # Gravitino server and 
Gravitino Iceberg REST server logs. Automatically created after the server 
starts.
-    |── data/                                   # Default directory for the 
Gravitino server to store data.
-    |── iceberg-rest-server/                    # Gravitino Iceberg REST 
server package and dependencies libraries.
-    └── scripts/                                # Extra scripts for Gravitino.
-```
+### Get the Gravitino package
+
+The Gravitino package comprises the Gravitino server and the Gravitino Iceberg 
REST server.
+You can manage these servers independently or run them concurrently on a 
single server.
+
+1. Download the latest Gravitino package from 
[GitHub](https://github.com/apache/gravitino/releases).
+
+   :::note
+   You can also build Gravitino by following the instructions in [How to Build 
Gravitino](./how-to-build.md).
+
+   - If you build Gravitino using the `./gradlew compileDistribution` command, 
you can find the Gravitino package in the `distribution/package` directory.
 
-#### Initialize the RDBMS (Optional)
+   - If you build Gravitino using the `./gradlew assembleDistribution` 
command, you can get the compressed Gravitino package with the name 
`gravitino-<version>-bin.tar.gz` in the `distribution` directory with sha256 
checksum file `gravitino-<version>-bin.tar.gz.sha256`.
+   :::
 
-If you want to use the relational backend storage, you need to initialize the 
RDBMS first. For the details on initializing the RDBMS, please check [How to 
use relational backend storage](./how-to-use-relational-backend-storage.md).
+2. Extract the Gravitino package and you should have these directories and 
files:
 
-#### Configure the Apache Gravitino server
+   ```text
+   |── ...
+   └── distribution/package
+      |── bin/
+      |   ├── gravitino.sh                        # Gravitino server Launching 
scripts.
+      |   └── gravitino-iceberg-rest-server.sh    # Gravitino Iceberg REST 
server Launching scripts.
+      |── catalogs
+      |   └── hadoop/                             # Apache Hadoop catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── hive/                               # Apache Hive catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── jdbc-doris/                         # JDBC doris catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── jdbc-mysql/                         # JDBC MySQL catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── jdbc-postgresql/                    # JDBC PostgreSQL catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── kafka/                              # Apache Kafka PostgreSQL 
catalog dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── lakehouse-iceberg/                  # Apache Iceberg catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |   └── lakehouse-paimon/                   # Apache Paimon catalog 
dependencies and configurations.
+      |── conf/                                   # All configurations for 
Gravitino.
+      |   ├── gravitino.conf                      # Gravitino server and 
Gravitino Iceberg REST server configuration.
+      |   ├── gravitino-iceberg-rest-server.conf  # Gravitino server 
configuration.
+      |   ├── gravitino-env.sh                    # Environment variables, 
etc., JAVA_HOME, GRAVITINO_HOME, and more.
+      |   └── log4j2.properties                   # log4j configuration for 
the Gravitino server and Gravitino Iceberg REST server.
+      |── libs/                                   # Gravitino server 
dependencies libraries.
+      |── logs/                                   # Gravitino server and 
Gravitino Iceberg REST server logs. Automatically created after the server 
starts.
+      |── data/                                   # Default directory for the 
Gravitino server to store data.
+      |── iceberg-rest-server/                    # Gravitino Iceberg REST 
server package and dependencies libraries.
+      └── scripts/                                # Extra scripts for 
Gravitino.
+   ```
 
-The Gravitino server configuration file is `conf/gravitino.conf`. You can 
configure the Gravitino server by modifying this file. Basic configurations 
have already been added to this file. All the configurations are listed in 
[Gravitino Server Configurations](./gravitino-server-config.md).
+### Initialize the RDBMS (Optional)
 
-#### Configure the Apache Gravitino server log
+If you want to use the `relational` backend storage, you need to initialize 
the RDBMS.
+For details on initializing the RDBMS, see [How to use relational backend 
storage](./how-to-use-relational-backend-storage.md).
 
-The Gravitino server log configuration file is `conf/log4j2.properties`. 
Gravitino uses Log4j2 as the Logging system. You can 
[Log4j2](https://logging.apache.org/log4j/2.x/) to do the log configuration.
+### Configure the Gravitino server
 
-#### Configure the Apache Gravitino server environment
+The `conf/gravitino.conf` file provides basic configurations for the Gravitino 
server.
+To configure the Gravitino server, you can update this file.
+For a full list of the Gravitino server configurations, see [Gravitino Server 
Configurations](./gravitino-server-config.md).
 
-The Gravitino server environment configuration file is 
`conf/gravitino-env.sh`. Gravitino exposes several environment variables. You 
can modify them in this file.
+### Configure the Gravitino server log
 
-#### Configure Apache Gravitino catalogs
+Gravitino uses [Log4j2](https://logging.apache.org/log4j/2.x/) as the logging 
system.
+The `conf/log4j2.properties` file provides the Gravitino server log 
configurations.
+To configure the Gravitino server log, you can update this file.
 
-Gravitino supports multiple catalogs. You can configure the catalog-level 
configurations by modifying the related configuration file in the 
`catalogs/<catalog-provider>/conf` directory. The configurations you set here 
apply to all the catalogs of the same type you create.
+### Configure the Gravitino server environment variables
 
-For example, if you want to configure the Hive catalog, you can modify the 
file `catalogs/hive/conf/hive.conf`. The detailed configurations are listed in 
the specific catalog documentation.
+Gravitino exposes several environment variables through the 
`conf/gravitino-env.sh` file.
+To configure these environment variables, you can update this file.
+
+### Configure the Gravitino catalogs
+
+Gravitino supports multiple catalogs.
+You can configure the catalog-level configurations by updating the related 
configuration file in the `catalogs/<catalog-provider>/conf` directory.
+For example, the `catalogs/hive/conf/hive.conf` file provides configurations 
for the Hive catalog.
+The configurations you set in the catalog configuration file will apply to all 
the catalogs of the same type that you created.
+For detailed configurations about each catalog, see related catalog 
documentation.
 
 :::note
-Gravitino takes the catalog configurations in the following order:
+Gravitino takes the catalog configurations in the following order of 
precedence:
 
-1. Catalog `properties` specified in catalog creation API or REST API.
+1. Catalog `properties` specified in the catalog creation API or REST API.
 2. Catalog configurations specified in the catalog configuration file.
 
-The catalog `properties` can override the catalog configurations specified in 
the configurationfile.
+The catalog `properties` overrides the catalog configurations specified in the 
configuration file.
 :::
 
-Gravitino supports passing in catalog-specific configurations if you add 
`gravitino.bypass.`. For example, if you want to pass in the HMS-specific 
configuration `hive.metastore.client.capability.check` to the underlying Hive 
client in the Hive catalog, add the `gravitino.bypass.` prefix.
+Gravitino supports passing in catalog-specific configurations by adding the 
`gravitino.bypass.` prefix to the specific catalog configurations.
+For example, you can pass in the HMS-specific configuration 
`hive.metastore.client.capability.check` to the underlying Hive client in the 
Hive catalog if you add the `gravitino.bypass.` prefix to the configuration.
 
-Also, Gravitino supports loading catalog-specific configurations from external 
files. For example,you can put your own `hive-site.xml` file in the 
`catalogs/hive/conf` directory, and Gravitino loads it automatically.
+Gravitino also supports loading catalog-specific configurations from external 
files.

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   configurations -> configuration



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