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update some documents

Author: younglee1 <[email protected]>
Author: jinyli <[email protected]>

Closes #263 from younglee1/doc/enhancement.


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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 3f86b5a479689887c644f5697a262193a63f5839
Parents: 0e8852d
Author: younglee1 <[email protected]>
Authored: Wed Apr 25 12:32:46 2018 +0800
Committer: Lionel Liu <[email protected]>
Committed: Wed Apr 25 12:32:46 2018 +0800

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 README.md                                  | 10 ++++----
 griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md         |  2 +-
 griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md           | 14 ++++-------
 griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md | 32 +++++++++++++------------
 4 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-griffin/blob/3f86b5a4/README.md
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diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index de4304c..9220b4f 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -27,27 +27,27 @@ Apache Griffin is a model driven data quality solution for 
modern data systems.
 
 ## Getting Started
 
-### First Try of Griffin
+### Quick Start
 
 You can try Griffin in docker following the [docker 
guide](griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md).
 
 ### Environment for Dev
 
-If you want to develop Griffin, please follow [this 
document](griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md), to skip complex environment 
building work.
+Follow [Apache Griffin Development Environment Build 
Guide](griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md) to set up development environment.
 
 ### Deployment at Local
 
-If you want to deploy Griffin in your local environment, please follow [this 
document](griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md).
+If you want to deploy Griffin in your local environment, please follow [Apache 
Griffin Deployment Guide](griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md).
 
 ## Community
 
-You can access [griffin home page](http://griffin.apache.org).
+For more information about Griffin, please visit our website at: [griffin home 
page](http://griffin.apache.org).
 
 You can contact us via email:
 - dev-list: <a 
href="mailto:[email protected]";>[email protected]</a>
 - user-list: <a 
href="mailto:[email protected]";>[email protected]</a>
 
-You can also subscribe this mail by sending a email to [subscribe 
dev-list](mailto:[email protected]) and [subscribe 
user-list](mailto:[email protected]).
+You can also subscribe the latest information by sending a email to [subscribe 
dev-list](mailto:[email protected]) and [subscribe 
user-list](mailto:[email protected]).
 
 You can access our issues on [JIRA 
page](https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GRIFFIN)
 

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-griffin/blob/3f86b5a4/griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md
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diff --git a/griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md 
b/griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md
index 0693c25..7894e80 100644
--- a/griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md
+++ b/griffin-doc/deploy/deploy-guide.md
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ under the License.
 -->
 
 # Apache Griffin Deployment Guide
-For Griffin users, you can deploy it with some dependencies in your 
environment, you can follow instructions below.
+For Griffin users, please follow the instructions below to deploy Griffin in 
your environment. Note that there are some dependencies should be installed 
first.
 
 ### Prerequisites
 You need to install following items

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-griffin/blob/3f86b5a4/griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md
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diff --git a/griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md b/griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md
index fc981cb..94e7e8a 100644
--- a/griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md
+++ b/griffin-doc/dev/dev-env-build.md
@@ -17,17 +17,11 @@ specific language governing permissions and limitations
 under the License.
 -->
 
-# Apache Griffin Develop Environment Build Guide
-For Griffin developers, you need to build an entire environment for 
development, it wastes time.
-You can directly use the Griffin docker image, to the functional test during 
your development.
-Please follow this [griffin docker guide](../docker/griffin-docker-guide.md).
+# Apache Griffin Development Environment Build Guide
+We have pre-built Griffin docker images for Griffin developers. You can use 
the images directly, which should be much faster than building the environment 
locally.
 
-## Preparation
-Follow this [griffin docker 
guide](../docker/griffin-docker-guide.md#environment-preparation).
-
-## Start in batch mode or streaming mode
-Usually, you can run the docker image in batch mode(always the first choice) 
or streaming mode(only if you need a streaming environment like kafka data 
source), choose a mode to start.
-For [Batch 
mode](../docker/griffin-docker-guide.md#how-to-use-griffin-docker-images-in-batch-mode)
 and [Streaming 
mode](../docker/griffin-docker-guide.md#how-to-use-griffin-docker-images-in-streaming-mode),
 follow step 1 and 2, you can start the docker container.
+## Set Up with Docker Images
+Here are step-by-step instructions on how to [pull Docker 
images](../docker/griffin-docker-guide.md#environment-preparation) from the 
repository and run containers using the images.
 
 ## Run or Debug at local
 ### For service module

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-griffin/blob/3f86b5a4/griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md
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diff --git a/griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md 
b/griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md
index bc36759..6038a0a 100644
--- a/griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md
+++ b/griffin-doc/docker/griffin-docker-guide.md
@@ -20,33 +20,35 @@ under the License.
 # Apache Griffin Docker Guide
 Griffin docker images are pre-built on docker hub, users can pull them to try 
griffin in docker.
 
-## Preparation
-
-### Environment preparation
+## Environment preparation
 1. Install [docker](https://docs.docker.com/engine/installation/) and [docker 
compose](https://docs.docker.com/compose/install/).
 2. Increase vm.max_map_count of your local machine, to use elasticsearch.
     ```
     sysctl -w vm.max_map_count=262144
     ```
-3. Pull griffin pre-built docker images.
-    ```
+## Pull the Docker Images
+   Here lists the griffin and dependent environment docker images:
+   - `bhlx3lyx7/svc_msr`: This image contains mysql, hadoop, hive, spark, 
livy, griffin service, griffin measure, and some prepared demo data, it works 
as a single node spark cluster, providing spark engine and griffin service.
+   - `bhlx3lyx7/elasticsearch`: This image is based on official elasticsearch, 
adding some configurations to enable cors requests, to provide elasticsearch 
service for metrics persist.
+   - `bhlx3lyx7/kafka`: This image contains kafka 0.8, and some demo streaming 
data, to provide streaming data source in streaming mode.
+   - `zookeeper:3.5`: This image is official zookeeper, to provide zookeeper 
service in streaming mode.
+       
+   Pull the images by the following commands.
+   ```
     docker pull bhlx3lyx7/svc_msr:0.2.0
     docker pull bhlx3lyx7/elasticsearch
     docker pull bhlx3lyx7/kafka
     docker pull zookeeper:3.5
-    ```
+   ```
    Or you can pull the images faster through mirror acceleration if you are in 
China.
-    ```
+   ```
     docker pull registry.docker-cn.com/bhlx3lyx7/svc_msr:0.2.0
     docker pull registry.docker-cn.com/bhlx3lyx7/elasticsearch
     docker pull registry.docker-cn.com/bhlx3lyx7/kafka
-    docker pull registry.docker-cn.com/zookeeper:3.5
-    ```
-   The docker images are the griffin environment images.
-    - `bhlx3lyx7/svc_msr`: This image contains mysql, hadoop, hive, spark, 
livy, griffin service, griffin measure, and some prepared demo data, it works 
as a single node spark cluster, providing spark engine and griffin service.
-    - `bhlx3lyx7/elasticsearch`: This image is based on official 
elasticsearch, adding some configurations to enable cors requests, to provide 
elasticsearch service for metrics persist.
-    - `bhlx3lyx7/kafka`: This image contains kafka 0.8, and some demo 
streaming data, to provide streaming data source in streaming mode.
-    - `zookeeper:3.5`: This image is official zookeeper, to provide zookeeper 
service in streaming mode.
+    docker pull registry.docker-cn.com/zookeeper:3.
+   ```
+## Start the Containers
+After pulling the images, you can run the docker image in [Batch 
mode](#how-to-use-griffin-docker-images-in-batch-mode)(always the first choice) 
or [Streaming mode](#how-to-use-griffin-docker-images-in-streaming-mode)(only 
if you need a streaming environment like kafka data source). Choose one mode 
and follow step1&2 to start the docker container.
 
 ### How to use griffin docker images in batch mode
 1. Copy 
[docker-compose-batch.yml](https://github.com/apache/incubator-griffin/blob/master/griffin-doc/docker/svc_msr/docker-compose-batch.yml)
 to your work path.
@@ -102,4 +104,4 @@ Griffin docker images are pre-built on docker hub, users 
can pull them to try gr
    You can trace the log in streaming-prof.log.
     ```
     tail -f streaming-prof.log
-    ```
\ No newline at end of file
+    ```

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