Author: cbegin
Date: Mon Jan  8 13:48:10 2007
New Revision: 494206

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=494206
Log:
Second attempt at improving online help page.

Modified:
    ibatis/trunk/site/pages/onlinehelp.vm

Modified: ibatis/trunk/site/pages/onlinehelp.vm
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ibatis/trunk/site/pages/onlinehelp.vm?view=diff&rev=494206&r1=494205&r2=494206
==============================================================================
--- ibatis/trunk/site/pages/onlinehelp.vm (original)
+++ ibatis/trunk/site/pages/onlinehelp.vm Mon Jan  8 13:48:10 2007
@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@
     <td width="33%">
       <h2>iBATIS for Java</h2>
         <p>iBATIS for Java offers both downloadable and online 
documentation.</p>
-        <p><strong>Downloadable (PDF) documentation for iBATIS for Java is 
available
-           <a href="javadownloads.cgi">HERE</a>.</strong>
+        <p><strong><a href="javadownloads.cgi">Downloadable (PDF) 
documentation</a> for iBATIS for
+          Java is available. We recommend you start with this before moving 
onto the JavaDocs.</strong>
         </p>
-
-        <p>Online Javadoc can be found here:</p>
+        <p>Online Javadoc can be found here and is also included with the 
distribution:</p>
         <ul>
           <li><a target="_blank" href="/docs/java/user">User Javadoc</a></li>
           <li><a target="_blank" href="/docs/java/dev">Developer 
Javadoc</a></li>
@@ -32,8 +31,9 @@
     <td width="33%">
       <h2>iBATIS for .NET</h2>
       <p>iBATIS for .Net offers both downloadable and online documentation.</p>
-      <p><strong>Downloadable (PDF and CHM) documentation for iBATIS for .Net 
is available
-         <a href="dotnetdownloads.cgi">HERE</a>.</strong>
+      <p><strong><a href="dotnetdownloads.cgi">Downloadable (PDF and CHM) 
documentation</a>
+        for iBATIS for .NET is available.  It is the same as the following
+        online reference documentation.</strong>
       </p>
       <p>Online documentation can be found here:</p>
       <ul>
@@ -43,7 +43,8 @@
     </td>
     <td width="33%">
       <h2>iBATIS for Ruby</h2>
-        <p>Online documentation for iBATIS for Ruby can be found here:</p>
+        <p>Online documentation for iBATIS for Ruby can be found here in 
familiar Ruby documentation
+          format:</p>
         <ul>
           <li><a href="docs/ruby/">iBATIS for Ruby Documentation</a></li>
         </ul>
@@ -55,10 +56,9 @@
   <p>The iBATIS wiki is a great source of additional information and FAQs.
      Everyone is welcome to add documentation to the wiki.  Superior wiki
      articles may be promoted to the official documentation.</p>
-  <p>Access the wiki
-    <a 
href="http://opensource.atlassian.com/confluence/oss/display/IBATIS/Home"; 
target="_blank">here</a>.
+  <p>
+    <a 
href="http://opensource.atlassian.com/confluence/oss/display/IBATIS/Home"; 
target="_blank">Access the wiki.</a>
   </p>
-
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