Author: dmagda
Date: Thu Mar 12 23:13:39 2020
New Revision: 1875143

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1875143&view=rev
Log:
updated contribution and proven use cases pages

Modified:
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html?rev=1875143&r1=1875142&r2=1875143&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html Thu Mar 12 
23:13:39 2020
@@ -54,11 +54,11 @@ under the License.
                 This guide discusses various types of contribution to Apache 
Ignite extending generic ideas
                 of the <a 
href="https://community.apache.org/gettingStarted/101.html"; target="_blank">ASF 
Getting
                 Started</a>. Contributing to Ignite doesn’t just mean 
writing code. Helping new users on the mailing
-                list and improving documentation are also important. In fact, 
proposing significant code changes usually requires
-                first gaining experience and credibility within the community 
by helping in other ways.
+                list and improving documentation are also important. In fact, 
proposing significant code changes
+                usually requires first gaining experience and credibility 
within the community by helping in other ways.
             </p>
             <p>
-                The guide organizes contributions in order that should be 
considered by new contributors
+                The guide organizes contributions in an order that should be 
considered by new contributors
                 who intend to get involved long-term. Build some track record 
of helping others, become more
                 experienced with Ignite rather than solely focusing on code 
pull-requests.
             </p>
@@ -70,10 +70,10 @@ under the License.
                        
                                <h2>Getting Started</h2>
                <p>
-                The first thing to do is to sign up to the <a 
href="mailto:[email protected]";>dev mailing
-                list</a> and say "Hello" to everyone in the community. Tell us 
as much as you can about your areas of
+                The first thing to do is to join our <a 
href="mailto:[email protected]";>dev mailing
+                list</a> and say "Hello" to everyone in the community. Tell us 
something about your areas of
                 expertise mentioning how exactly you would like to contribute. 
We are a friendly and inclusive
-                community and will try to simplify your "onboarding" 
considering your strengths or areas of interest.
+                community and will try to simplify your "onboarding" 
considering your strengths and areas of interest.
 
                 Also, make sure to share your JIRA ID in the same email
                 (<a 
href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/projects/IGNITE"target="_blank";>create a 
new one</a>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ under the License.
                 the contributors' list.
             </p>
             <p>
-                Next, check <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/How+to+Collaborate"; 
target="_blank">
+                Next, check the <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/How+to+Collaborate"; 
target="_blank">
                 How to Collaborate</a> page for more details on various 
communication channels used by the community
                 members. Even though most of the discussions take place on the 
dev list, we hang out on Slack.
             </p>
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ under the License.
                        <h2>Contribute by Helping Others</h2>
 
             <p>
-                A great way to contribute to Ignite and to get more practical 
experience is to help answer
+                A great way to contribute to Ignite and get more practical 
experience is by helping answer
                 user questions on the [email protected] mailing list or 
on StackOverflow. Ignite users ask dozens
                 of questions daily; taking a few minutes to help answer a 
question or troubleshoot an issue is a very
                 valuable contribution to the project and community success.
@@ -116,9 +116,9 @@ under the License.
                
                        <ul class="page-list">
                 <li>
-                    Come across a misprint or unclear documentation section? 
Use "Suggest Edits" feature of
-                    our <a href="https://apacheignite.readme.io/docs"; 
target="_blank"> main documentation portal</a> to propose a
-                    change.
+                    Came across a misprint or unclear documentation section? 
Use "Suggest Edits" feature of
+                    our <a href="https://apacheignite.readme.io/docs"; 
target="_blank"> main documentation portal</a> to
+                    propose a change.
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     Select any <a 
href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20resolution%20%3D%20Unresolved%20AND%20status%20not%20in%20(closed%2C%20resolved)%20and%20component%20%3D%20documentation%20%20ORDER%20BY%20priority%20DESC%2C%20updated%20DESC"
 target="_blank">
@@ -187,29 +187,29 @@ under the License.
                     SQL tasks</a> to start with.
                 </li>
                 <li>
-                    If you are more interested in .NET, Python, Node.JS or 
other programming languages different from
-                    Java then use <a
+                    If you are more interested in .NET, Python, Node.JS, or 
other programming languages different from
+                    Java, then use <a
                         
href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20labels%20in%20(newbie)%20and%20component%20in%20(platforms)%20and%20status%20%3D%20OPEN"
 target="_blank">
-                    this filter</a> for the selection of the first tasks.
+                    this filter</a> to select your first task.
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     Curious in distributed data structures?
                     <a
                             
href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20component%20in%20(%22data%20structures%22)%20and%20status%20%3D%20OPEN"
 target="_blank">
-                        Help to improve</a> existing ones or contribute a 
brand new.
+                        Help to improve</a> the existing ones or contribute a 
brand new.
                 </li>
             </ul>
             <p>
                 Still haven't found anything gripping? Search through all the 
tickets in
                 <a href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/IGNITE/";>Ignite 
Jira</a>, check the latest Ignite
-                discussions on the dev list or simply email us.
+                discussions on the dev list, or simply email us.
             </p>
             
             
                        <h2>Become a Committer and PMC Member</h2>
             <p>
                 We love contributions and gladly promote active contributors 
to committers and PMC members! If you
-                are new to Apache Software Foundation then Ignite will be an 
excellent
+                are new to Apache Software Foundation then Ignite will be an 
excellent choice to start your journey.
             </p>
             <p>
                 The most important point of becoming a committer for Apache 
projects is active participation

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html?rev=1875143&r1=1875142&r2=1875143&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html 
(original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html Thu Mar 
12 23:13:39 2020
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ under the License.
         community attempts to accumulate all publicly disclosed production use 
cases of Ignite with some
         reference data. We hope the shared architectural and implementation 
details will help you to build
         more robust Ignite solutions. </p>
-      <p> If you have an Apache Ignite use case to share then do not hesitate 
reaching us out on <a href="mailto:[email protected]?Subject=Share my 
Apache Ignite Use Case"
+      <p> If you have an Apache Ignite use case to share, then do not hesitate 
to reach us out on <a href="mailto:[email protected]?Subject=Share my 
Apache Ignite Use Case"
                    aria-label="Send Email"> the Ignite dev list</a> and we'll 
get it added to this page. </p>
     
                    
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ under the License.
     
                            
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> Teradata </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite usage for handling of 
real-time marketing campaigns. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite usage for handling 
real-time marketing campaigns. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/z28rthKIrDk"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@ under the License.
                            
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">Yahoo! Japan</h3>
       <p> <a 
href="https://techblog.yahoo.co.jp/oss/yahoo_shopping_purchases_ignite/"; 
aria-label="Session at Yahoo Japan" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This blog 
post</a> explains why Yahoo! Japan chose Apache Ignite as their solution for a 
highly scalable caching system that
-        can process tens of thousands requests per second. SQL queries were 
performed via thin clients since they do not require a standard
+        can process tens of thousands of requests per second. SQL queries were 
performed via thin clients since they do not require a standard
         topology join and therefore are easier to be handled through container 
services. After a successful POC, Ignite fully met their
         requirements and was quickly rolled into production. </p>
     
         
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> American Airlines </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> American Airlines IT transformation 
with with the help of Apache Ignite. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> American Airlines IT transformation 
with the help of Apache Ignite. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/ZZI7MVE1ZBo"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ under the License.
     
       
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> 24 Hour Fitness </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a digital 
integration hub and database for a variety 24 Hour Fitness services. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a digital 
integration hub and database for a variety of 24 Hour Fitness services. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/EdFOKJIjRSg"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ under the License.
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">HomeAway</h3>
       <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> As HomeAway, a leading vacation 
rental website, moved to the cloud, they had to migrate a
         myriad of systems. One such is the high volume, low latency, real-time 
system that computes
-        pricing and powered by Apache Ignite. </p>
+        pricing and is powered by Apache Ignite. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/qYd9GGRC4L0"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@ under the License.
     
       
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">JacTravel</h3>
-      <p> <a 
href="https://www.imcsummit.org/2017/eu/sessions/using-memory-grid-compute-achieve-scalability-and-high-performance-legacy-travel";
 aria-label="In-Memory Computing Session" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This 
presentation</a> looks at the technical challenges presented to JacTravel Group,
-        following the acquisition of rival hotel accommodation provider, 
TotalStay Group in 2016.
+      <p> <a 
href="https://www.imcsummit.org/2017/eu/sessions/using-memory-grid-compute-achieve-scalability-and-high-performance-legacy-travel";
 aria-label="In-Memory Computing Session" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This 
presentation</a> looks at the technical challenges presented to JacTravel Group
+        following the acquisition of rival hotel accommodation provider 
TotalStay Group in 2016.
         Working with specialist technology consultancy, CG Consultancy, a 
strategic 18 month project
         was formed with a roadmap to consolidate booking platforms, ring-fence 
legacy functionality and
         to deliver enhanced search capability - underpinned with in-memory 
data grid capabilities of
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ under the License.
   
         
         <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> E-Therapeutics </h3>
-        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a 
high-performance compute system for drugs discovery. </p>
+        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a 
high-performance compute system for drugs' discovery. </p>
         <div class="usecase-video">
           <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/PFHb-UuhGkk"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ under the License.
       
         
         <h3 class="usecase-video-title">FSB Tech</h3>
-        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Building real-time sports betting 
platform with Apache Ignite. </p>
+        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Building a real-time sports 
betting platform with Apache Ignite. </p>
         <div class="usecase-video">
           <iframe width="560" height="315" 
src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/RxWLt3x_yBk"; frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; 
encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>


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